I NEED HELP!! How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style?

A) Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence
B) Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly
C) Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas
D) Maintain a formal style

I think that Clarifying the topic and purpose in the topic sentence (A).

. How does paragraph 5 contribute to the ideas developed throughout the text? answer

Which cream cheese has the best value per ounce? Show your work for both A and B first and then determine which is the best value.

Brand A $2.89 for 8 oz.

Brand B $4.19 for 12 oz.
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What is the dramatic irony in "Dr. Nemur says I have to take a Rorschach Test tomorrow. I wonder what that is."

Researching the impact of others in our communities or societies requires a critical eye. It also requires much reflection. Think about someone who has had a positive impact on others.
• Briefly summarize their impact and how they inspire you.
• How does examining the views of others during the research process impact your original view of that person?

Which answer choice has an inappropriate shift in voice?
A.Gabrielle's computer would not load her desktop, so she took it to the IT office.

B.Gabrielle also unsubscribed from many e-mail lists, and this helped cut down on her junk mail.

C.Her computer was infected with a virus, but the malware was removed by the IT employee .

D.The employee suggested a specific virus blocker, and this program was downloaded by Gabrielle.

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The passage is a draft of a student's report. Which sentence should be removed from the passage? Ford's Assembly Line Henry Ford formed Ford Motor Company in 1903. Ford created the first moving assembly line. His assembly line reduced the amount of time it took to make a car. As a result, production of automobiles increased, and the price decreased. For the first time, average Americans could afford to buy automobiles. Almost 17 million cars were produced from 1908 to 1928. This use of assembly lines to create many products is called mass production. Mass production is making a large number of identical products. Mass production causes pollution. Henry Ford's use of mass production had a lasting impact on the manufacturing industry.

Which sentence has a capitalization error?
A. Last night Laura, Michelle, Nancy, Sheri, and I went out for dinner. (Capitalize: dinner)
B. I really enjoyed the book "Love is Great" by Tim Rivers (Capitalize: is)
C. I like it when Craig sings. (Capitalize: sings)
D. Edna needs help packing for her trip to Scotland (Capitalize: trip)

1. rBvA
~B
A>(C v D)
~C
Prove: D

passage.
Despite arguments by some, Muir's preservation and Pinchot's conservation
philosophies are not at odds. In fact, they play, together, a huge role in
protecting our natural open spaces-for generations to come.
What is the meaning of the word philosophies as it is used above?
A systems of beliefs
B
lists of steps to take
© groups that care for things
structures for organizations

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1: Read the dialogue below. Underline the simile.
EMPEROR PENGUIN: (flaps wings as if in flight) Well, Parrot, as I can attest, not
being able to fly isn't the end of the world. I must admit, however, that the
rest of its body is rather dull. (peers into clearing) That brown is as dull as dirt.
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What kind of logical fallacy is found in this paragraph from “How Does Technology Affect the World’s Most Social Animal?”

For all its power to connect people across vast expanses of land, though, today’s technology has its drawbacks. Some researchers are finding evidence that constant online activity can lead to social isolation and other ill effects, causing the writer of a 2012 article in The Atlantic, to remark “We live in an accelerating contradiction: the more connected we become, the lonelier we are.” The article relates the story of actress Yvette Vickers. She had been dead in her home for months before anyone checked on her. In the months before she died, she hadn’t communicated with family or friends, just fans she had met through the Internet.
false cause
appeal to fear
begging the question
appeal to authorit

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I can feel him watching me and I’m about to say some sarcastic comment when he asks, “Hey, you wanna feed the ducks?” I look over at him with a shocked expression. “Well?” He says. “I’d love to feed them, but we don’t have any food.” He grins and replies, “You totally underestimate me sunflower.” “What?” I ask as he starts walking back to the car. He quickly comes back with two bags filled with bread crumbs. “Here.” He hands me a bag. “I always come to the park prepared.” I smile and reply, “I never thought you’d be a guy who’s prepared for anything.” “Haha very funny.” We start feeding the ducks and I’m actually having fun. Who would have thought that I’d be at a park feeding ducks with the most annoying guy in the world? Certainly not me.

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Which type of poem was most popular during the mid-eighteenth century, at the height
of the neoclassical era?

In an essay, details serve a similar function to: A) An instruction manual for putting together furniture.incorrect answer B) The characters in a work of fiction.incorrect answer C) Blank pages in a notebook.incorrect answer D) The evidence an attorney uses to convict a criminal.

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Creative Media,

You may your Your media piece must express a specific viewpoint and a sophisticated understanding of a topic using text, images, and sound. You may also choose to do a short animation or video. You will submit your media piece along with a one-paragraph essay that briefly explains your topic and your viewpoint on that topic. You will also identify your purpose, motivation, and audience for this media piece and explain, with specific examples, the advantages of the media piece you selected. use integrate multimedia and visual display into a presentation to clarify information, and strengthen claims and evidence.​​

Select the proper syllables for the following word simultaneous

Right at this moment, Leon _____ the delivery truck to the storage facility.

What does the point of view used in the excerpt help the reader understand? *

What is another way to describe the structure of a work?
A.
Framework
B.
Chronology
C.
Story plan
D.
None of the above

What is the purpose of the parts to whole analogy?

O compares the parts to its whole or the whole to its parts
O describes the similarities between the parts of an object
O describes the differences between the parts of a whole
O compares the symbols of parts and wholes​

Write a letter to president of united states explaining how he can make our country a better place to live.

Please say in your own words​

Why do writers use puns?
to create humor or levity

to provide source material

to confuse the reader

to impress the reviewers

Which option describes a homophonic pun?
a pun that achieves its humor through the use of how words appear on the page

a pun that uses two words that sound the same but have different meanings

a pun that uses two words that look the same but have different meanings

a pun that uses ideas from two different disciplines, such as science and art

Which option describes a homographic pun?
a pun that uses two words that look the same but have different meanings

a pun that achieves its humor through very detailed description

a pun that is both humorous and serious at the same time

a pun that uses two words that sound the same but have different meanings

How does this scene contribute to the story's plot?

should government give financial support to those moving from city to village.
first sensible answer will receive brainliest

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Your newest coworker is not as productive as other members of your team. You and your coworkers have to work harder to make up for this.