how can i improve my writing?
He pulls me closer by the waist of my pants, which makes my heart flutter. I know what's coming and it melts my insides when he kisses me as if it we've known each other our entire lives; so strong and passionate, yet extremely sad and desperate. He's my rock and he knows. He knows I couldn't live without him. As we dance together in the middle of the living room, my pregnant belly bumping against his, I recall how we fell in love i the first place. we met two years ago, I was 23 and he 22.

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Answer 1

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honestly, this is already good, and I would suggest the first place falling in love, you could do a flashback. So, the character may have been having a bad day or just lost something important, and he (the other main character) ran into her on accident but noticed she was not okay. He proceeds to comfort her and then the flashback is over. They then have a conversation (in the present time) about how they first fell in love and how they knew it was love at first sight.

Explanation:

I don't know just an idea

Answer 2

Answer:

I honestly think that this sample write is, AMAZING. Though it could go for a flashback of how they met, also maybe a age change, but those suggestions are up to the writer.

Explanation:

The flashback could be about how they met, and how they fell in love.

And the age change, well that's up to the writer if she wants to change the age, but I would go for ages late 20's or early 30's. But again this is up to the writer.

HOPE THIS HELPS :)


Related Questions

Why does Hayden feel like she is
living the same day over and over?

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Answer:

¿Por qué Hayden siente que es ella?

viviendo el mismo día una y otra vez?

El Día de la Marmota se hizo conocido gracias a la película Hechizo del tiempo, donde el protagonista tenía que revivir el mismo día una y otra vez hasta que lograra encontrar la manera de terminar con esa maldición. Y en el cine hay varias propuestas que tienen esa misma premisa, las comedias, la ciencia ficción y también el terror ha usado ese gancho en la trama. Aquí hacemos un repaso por algunas de esas películas.

Answer:

Each day she tries to hide and get rid of the monster.

Explanation:

Took the test

The French teacher, Mr. Bueller, realizes that Victor is faking his knowledge of French. Identify the event from Mr. Bueller’s past that leads him to keep the truth to himself. In what way does his decision help advance the plot?

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Answer:

The past event that helps Mr. Bueller understand Victor's situation is that he had also tried his very best to try to impress his then college girlfriend. In the same way, he knew Victor was also trying to get Teresa's attention, and thus, Mr. Bueller decided not to reveal anything or speak anything about the French class.

This decision helped Victor gain the confidence he needed to be with Teresa and also allowed them to hang out and be acquainted. It paved the way for the two to get to know each other without Victor being embarrassed by their French teacher and ruining all his plans. And it wouldn't also lead to Victor tutoring Teresa.

Explanation:

Gary Soto's short story "Seventh Grade" is about a young seventh-grade boy named Victor and his attempts to impress a girl that she liked in the same class. The short story occurred at the school grounds and especially at the French class.

The French teacher Mr. Bueller also knows that Victor is trying to impress Teresa, who is taking the French class. His decision to join the class is an act to be near her, impress her, and hopefully get her to notice him and like him. Mr. Bueller knows too well what Victor is doing because he too had acted the same way with his college girlfriend. He had done everything possible and even spent way above his ability to impress his girlfriend, and so, he knows Victor's actions are all too similar to his past.

So, he did not reveal the truth about Victor's situation in speaking French, thereby prevent any embarrassment for Victor. This act also paved the way for Victor and Teresa to hang out together and thus, makes it possible for Victor to feel successful in trying to get Teresa to notice him. This decision to withhold any of the truths helped Victor gaining Teresa's attention and thus, helped them get together with Victor agreeing to tutor her in French.

Define this quote from King's letter from Birmingham Jail: "I can't join you in your praise for the police department."

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Answer:Selfish, without empathy

Explanation:

What are the best ways for someone to adjust their first draft to include new information? Select three options.
1. by adding it to an existing or new paragraph
Albs
2. by adding it to their notes in case they need it later

3. by adding it to their draft as an opposition paragraph

4.by replacing an unreliable source with the new one

5.by replacing less-convincing evidence in their draft

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Answer:

Option 1, Option 3 and option 5

Explanation:

i need help i need help

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Answer:

2. eat

3. works

4. closes

5. play

6. teaches

7. start and finish

8. lives

9. watch

10. tidies

*Here's a tip: when it is just one person or thing you are talking about, add an "s" at the end of the word like - John plays

*If it is two people or more, there is no "s" at the end of the word - Tom and Jim play

2. Eats is the answer to the first one !

Psychology 1A

Question:

Jose is unable to recall which number on his phone’s dial pad correspond to which letters without looking. This is most likely due to

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Encoding effect

The spacing effect

Interference

Source amnesia

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Answer:

I think it is the spacing effect

Read the scenario about a formal discussion. Malia and her colleagues are discussing ways to improve hiring practices. Malia thinks that their company does not do a very good job at recruiting or interviewing skilled candidates, so she has researched effective hiring practices and has brought lots of ideas with her. Malia offers the information she has brought with her. She listens carefully to her colleagues’ concerns and answers questions. She uses new terminology she learned in her research. Which statement best describes what kind of presenter Malia is? Malia is an ineffective presenter because the language she uses is not appropriate or accessible for the audience and topic. Malia is an ineffective presenter because she is critical of the company’s hiring practices, and does not respond properly. Malia is an effective presenter because she shares ideas supported by research, and she listens and responds to other members. Malia is an effective presenter because she shares her opinions and challenges the company’s current hiring practices.

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Answer:

C) Malia is an effective presenter because she shares ideas supported by research, and she listens and responds to other members.

Explanation:

Why the other answers are incorrect:

A) Malia "uses new terminology she learned IN HER RESEARCH," meaning the language she uses directly applies to the topic at hand. The scenario also says nothing about her language being inaccessible for the audience.

B) It is true that Malia is "critical of the company's hiring practices" considering the scenario says that she thinks "their company does not do a very good job at recruiting or interviewing skilled candidates," so that is what her presentation would be about. However, it is not true that Malia does not respond properly because the scenario clearly states that she shares new ideas and information and responds to questions from her colleagues, which would be considered a proper response.

D) Since A and B are incorrect, by the process of elimination we know that Malia is an effective speaker (since C and D are the only options left). The statement in option D is true, but it does not explain what makes her an effective presenter. Sharing opinions without evidence is not an effective argument, and that paired with challenging the company's hiring practices is not a good balance of speaking and responding, the major indicators of an effective presentation; in the case of option D, Malia "is an effective presenter" because she only speaks, or talks AT her colleagues, which is not true because in the scenario "she listens carefully to her colleagues' concerns and answers."

the correct answer would be C

In "The First Seven Years" by Bernard Malamud, how is the climax of the story also an epiphany for Feld?

A) Feld's confrontation with Sobel makes him to realize he wanted the wrong things for Miriam.

B) Feld is surprised by Sobel's admission and realizes he will have to rescind his offer to Max.

C) Feld is shocked by Sobel's confession but then realizes he sensed Sobel's feelings.

D) Feld's argument with Sobel forces him to face his situation and admit his mortality,

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Answer:

Explanation:

its d

There could be two answers to this!!

ANSWER:

#1 is D.
#2 is B.

Hope this helps!!

HELP ASAP I HAVE LIMITED TIME *I WILL GIVE BRIANLIEST FOR THE FIRST ANSWER
Study the conflict in this White Fang excerpt. Impelled by the blows that rained upon him, now from this side, now from that, White Fang swung back and forth like a pendulum. Varying were the emotions that surged through him. At first, he had known surprise. Then came a momentary fear, when he yelped several times to the impact of the hand. But this was quickly followed by anger. Which story element plays a key role in this conflict? theme mystery tension setting

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Answer:

Based on the choices you have given, tension seems the most appropriate.

Explanation:

The situation given is very stressful - tension

Answer:

its c i took the test

Explanation:



Which choice best replaces the underlined word?

Read the sentence from Rina's comparative essay, and

decide how she can make her language formal and

objective.

The narrative becomes scarier when Enrique can no

longer keep his eyes open.

more terrifying

more frightening

more concerning

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Answer:more frightening

Explanation:

Answer:

more frightening

Explanation:

Looking from outer space, the only made-made structure that can be seen is the 3,500 mile great wall of china.

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Answer:

This is false.

Explanation:

Answer:

this statement is false.

Explanation:

This has come to be a fib over the years. Although the Great Wall of China can be seen from the moon, it cannot be seen from space itself. Some man-made structures that can be seen from space are; The Pyramids of Giza, The Greenhouses at Almeria, Bridges, lonely desert roads, and cities at night.  

Fill in the blank with a verb that agrees with the indefinite pronoun. Each of the dancers __________ solos.

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Answer: were

Explanation: Each of the dancers were solos

dance. a verb is an action word. your accurate verb would be dance because they are dancers.

Q1. What was the effect of the fire on different animals? lesson Flames in the forest

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Answer: Fires affect animals mainly through effects on their habitat. Fires often cause short-term increases in wildlife foods that contribute to increases in populations of some animals.

Explanation: hope this helped

Read the passage from Animal Farm. They had just finished singing it for the third time when Squealer, attended by two dogs, approached them with the air of having something important to say. He announced that, by a special decree of Comrade Napoleon, "Beasts of England" had been abolished. From now onwards it was forbidden to sing it. The animals were taken aback. "Why?" cried Muriel. "It's no longer needed, comrade," said Squealer stiffly. "'Beasts of England' was the song of the Rebellion. But the Rebellion is now completed. The execution of the traitors this afternoon was the final act. The enemy both external and internal has been defeated. In 'Beasts of England' we expressed our longing for a better society in days to come. But that society has now been established. Clearly this song has no longer any purpose." Frightened though they were, some of the animals might possibly have protested, but at this moment the sheep set up their usual bleating of "Four legs good, two legs bad," which went on for several minutes and put an end to the discussion. So "Beasts of England" was heard no more. In its place Minimus, the poet, had composed another song which began: Animal Farm, Animal Farm, Never through me shalt thou come to harm! and this was sung every Sunday morning after the hoisting of the flag. But somehow neither the words nor the tune ever seemed to the animals to come up to "Beasts of England." How does the introduction of Minimus the poet support the author's purpose? Minimus represents the Soviet people’s determination to defend the country against attack. Minimus represents the producers of state-approved songs and slogans in Stalin's era. Minimus represents the true feelings of all Soviet people and their commitment to communism. Minimus represents the underlying loyalty that Soviet people had to Stalin despite his flaws.

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Answer:

Minimus represents the producers of state-approved songs and slogans in Stalin's era.

Explanation:

George Orwell's "Animal Farm" is an allegorical take on the dictatorial government of the Soviet Union. Using animal characters as the main protagonists, the author presents the state of authority that befalls any 'government' that works to overcome one another, and the futile result that only leads back to the original condition.

In the given passage from the novel, the animals were seen singing "Beasts of England" which is a rebellious song that inspires them to be united and have a sense of brotherhood. But when Squealer came to announce the prohibition of the song and instead introduced a new song composed by the poet Minimus. This new song didn't seem to have the same effect of unity and patriotism as "Beast of England" does. But being ordered to sing only the new song, the animals on the farm have no choice.

This 'forceful' introduction and implementation of the new song to replace the old, familiar song can be seen as a representation of the state-approved songs and slogans under the rule of Stalin (or in the case of the story, Napoleon) through puppet producers such as Minimus.

Answer:

B. Minimus represents the producers of state-approved songs and slogans in Stalin's era.

Explanation:

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Write a short personal reaction to the phrase below. Use reaction words. Example: The first day at a new school . . . I would be excited, but nervous. I would be shy and scared to talk to others. A storm . . .

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Answer:

A storm is huge and full of rain and lightning read thunder the ground on the earth, as rain pours and makes rough shingling sounds. Storms can be quit and calm, Storms can be heavy and loud.  

Explanation:

yeah thats all i got

*PLEASE ANSWER* Which information is included in a style manual? a.) a historical timeline b.) proper citation format of formal papers c.) a glossary of terms used in literature d.) supporting details for research papers

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Answer:

B.

Explanation:

A style manual or style guide can be defined as a format used to design and write a document. This manual helps a writer to follow the standards of writing, formatting, and designing a pattern to be used for communicating within an organization. This manual can be used within any environment such as publications or organization.

A style guide can be used to standardize guidelines or format for citation, punctutaion, capitalization, and-the-like.

So, from the given options the correct one is option B.

It’s B. Because you need a proper citation format of formal papers. Sorry if I’m wrong but good- luck.I learned this in my class so it should be right

Psychology 1A

Question:

Aldo forms mental images as he inputs information in his memory. This process is
called_encoding.

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mental

optical

reflective

visual

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Answer is Mental that's the process in which you are looking for

*QUICKEST ANSWER GETS BRIANLIEST* I HAVE LIMITED TIME HELP ASAP PLEASE Read this excerpt from White Fang. White Fang saw his mother taken aboard Three Eagles’ canoe, and tried to follow her. A blow from Three Eagles knocked him backward to the land. The canoe shoved off. He sprang into the water and swam after it, deaf to the sharp cries of Grey Beaver to return. Even a man-animal, a god, White Fang ignored, such as the terror he was in of losing his mother. But gods are accustomed to being obeyed, and Grey Beaver wrathfully launched a canoe in pursuit. When he overtook White Fang, he reached down and by the nape of the neck lifted him clear of the water. He did not deposit him at once in the bottom of the canoe. Holding him suspended with one hand, with the other hand he proceeded to give him a beating. (The conflict in this excerpt is important to the plot development because Grey Beaver punishes White Fang until he becomes violent and ceases to care about the consequences.) (White Fang gives up and becomes a weak character after being abandoned by his mother.) (Kiche is hurt in the outburst and is returned to the camp because of her injuries).( White Fang learns to survive the loss of his mother and the great challenge of human punishment.)

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Answer:

White Fang learns to survive the loss of his mother and the great challenge of human punishment.

Explanation:

When his mother gets taken, White Fang attempts to go after her by jumping into the water and swimming after the canoe. But, he ignores Grey Beaver calling him to return. Grey Beaver goes after him in a canoe and snatches him out of the water and proceeds to give him a beating for disobeying him. So, he is being punished for not listening all while having to deal with the loss of his mother.

Hope that helps.

Answer:

White Fang learns to survive the loss of his mother and the great challenge of human punishment.

Explanation:

Hope this helps you!

Psychology 1A

Question:

"What is the capital of New York?" The answer to this question is in your _ Long-
term storage.

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episodic

procedural

semantic

cognitive

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Answer:

Semantic memory

Explanation:

Semantic memory is the ability to remember things you have learned to understand something

The answer is 3: samantic

Is anyone having issues viewing the answers to searched questions?

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Answer:yes wth

Explanation:

Answer:

Yes

Explanation:

I believe brainly is having server issues.

Some restrictionist, or people who are against immigration, argue that poor people shouldn’t have babies if they can’t feed them. Why do people from poorer countries like Mexico tend to have more children and go against? And is it really a threat to overpopulation?

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Answer:

When faced with a lack of material possession, it is natural for humans to cling to sentiment, hence the value placed on immaterial concepts such as family, honor, and hard work in Mexican culture. Why should being poor exclude someone from the right to procreate? It is a basic human right. They are not having children out of spite. There is a blatant cultural difference that many choose to ignore. Being poor does not mean you are not allowed to live the best life that you can. As for the threat of overpopulation within the United States, many of the latest generation have pledged not to have children. Eventually, we will need a population boost, if for no other reason than to fill the age gap in the work force.

Explanation:

Which character or characters from The Metamorphosis most clearly represent society's abandonment of Gregor?

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Answer:

The three boarders

It’s the Three borders

“The possibility also exists that all this interbreeding could lead to new strains of herbicide-resistant super-weeds.”

Which words tell the reader that this sentence contains subjective language?

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“Possibility” “could”
This means what the author is talking about is not objective information.

The reader that this sentence contains subjective language

Possibility” “could”

This indicates that the information the author is discussing is not factual.

What is information?

Information is a general term for everything with the capacity to inform. Information is most fundamentally concerned with the interpretation of what may be sensed. Any naturally occurring process that is not entirely random, as well as any discernible pattern in any medium, can be said to convey some level of information.

The utilization of private feelings in a text or discussion is known as subjective language. The private state is a blanket word for judgments, assessments, feelings, and speculative thoughts (Quirk et al. 1985). Here are some samples of subjective sentences from different kinds of documents.

Therefore,  The information the author is discussing is not factual.

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In which of the following instances would you be most likely to write a compare-and-contrast essay? A. when writing a report on how to reduce air pollution B. when writing a mystery story set in an abandoned hotel C. when writing about why Great Britain was the birthplace of the Industrial Revolution D. when writing about the effects of high-fat and low-fat diets

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Answer:

I would say the effects of high-fat and low-fat diets.

Explanation:

For [A] a report on how to reduce air pollution would be expository or persuasive.

For [B] a mystery story would be entertaining and engaging.

For [C] why Great Britain was the birthplace of the industrial revolution would be a persuasive exposition, factually based.

For [D] you would write and exposition comparison to describe the benefits and detriments of the two types of diets, thus a "compare-and-contrast" essay.

Cheers.

Answer: D. When writing about the effects of high-fat and low-fat diets because you can compare-and-contrast the good and the bad effects of both high-fat and low-fat diets and how both diets effect your body whether they are good or bad.

Explanation:

Why am I adding have not kept in touch with the man of his unit (provide at least two reasons)?

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Is there a picture for this? If so send so I can answer.
I need more info to answer your question is very vague

Give an example of how your conscience would influence your level of civil disobedience against something you thought was unjust.

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Your mind, or your conscience, determines the way you think. People have different beliefs about different ideas. Some people are for an idea while others are against an idea. Everyone’s opinion is different because everyone’s mind is different. If someone believes that civil the civilians is the best thing in the world then their minds would influence that. They might have had some sort of experience in the past that would lead them to believe that.
However, if somebody thinks civil disobedience is terrible, and violence will only create change, then their mind or their conscience would influence that because they had some experience in the past that would influence their decisions

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In an essay the hook is usually?

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Answer:

it is the  1-2 opening sentences of your essay. They are used to capture readers' attention and make them want to continue reading your essay.

Explanation:

hope this helps

You can use a question as a hook or a hypothetical situation. This will get your readers intrigued

Write five questions for an interview with Rikki-tikki-tavi about the events of this passage:
Rikki-tikki's eyes grew red again, and he danced up to Karait with the peculiar rocking, swaying motion that he had inherited from his family. It looks very funny, but it is so perfectly balanced a gait that you can fly off from it at any angle you please; and in dealing with snakes this is an advantage. If Rikki-tikki had only known, he was doing a much more dangerous thing than fighting Nag, for Karait is so small, and can turn so quickly, that unless Rikki bit him close to the back of the head, he would get the return-stroke in his eye or lip. But Rikki did not know: his eyes were all red, and he rocked back and forth, looking for a good place to hold. Karait struck out. Rikki jumped sideways and tried to run in, but the wicked little dusty gray head lashed within a fraction of his shoulder, and he had to jump over the body, and the head followed his heels close.
—“Rikki-Tikki-Tavi,”
Rudyard Kipling
Write five questions for an interview with Rikki-tikki-tavi about the events of this passage.

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Answer:

1. Why did you bite Karait?

2. Why did you try to run him?

3. What was the purpose of the dance?

4. Do you believe that it would have gone better had you been aware of your actions?

5. Did you enjoy yourself.

Explanation:

These are borderline, generic questions. However, you can go more in depth if you like. Think of this as a rough draft. Only you have control over the final page.

Answer:

1. Why did you bite Karait?

2. Why did you try to run him?

3. What was the purpose of the dance?

4. Do you believe that it would have gone better had you been aware of your actions?

5. Did you enjoy yourself.

An external conflict is a struggle between a character and an outside force. An internal conflict occurs when a character is struggling with his or her feelings. Reread the last half of page 4, which is the right side. Are the children facing an internal or external conflict as they walk to the closet and unlock the door? Explain your answer. ( This question is based on the story “All Summer in a Day”)

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Answer: I don’t know what I’m supposed to be reading, but if it’s something to deal with their inner thoughts, like who should open the door or something like that, internal

Explanation:

Provide two pieces of evidence proving Eddie and his brother Joe have a lot of respect for their mother? (The five people you meet in heaven)

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What topic is this refferring to??

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A normal chromosome and its homolog carrying an inversion are given. The dot () represents the centromere.Normal: A B C D E F G H I JInversion: a b c d g f e h i jWhat type of inversion is present and what is the name of the structure that will form during synapsis? Read this sentence from the interview. The great statues plead for proportion in life, the great symphonies suggest the melody of conduct, and the great plays cultivate the heart and brain. How does the personification in the line "great statues plead for proportion in life" affect the meaning of the interview? A-It indicates that sculptors find it difficult to make their statues lifelike. B-It implies that artists want to be recognized for doing good work C-It suggests that artists create their art to bring harmony to life. D-It conveys the idea that good statues must look like real people. A turntable A is built into a stage for use in a theatrical production. It is observed during a rehearsal that a trunk B starts to slide on the turntable 15 s after the turntable begins to rotate. Knowing that the trunk undergoes a constant tangential acceleration of 0.3 m/s^2 , determine the coefficient of static friction between the trunk and the turntable Which contributed to the spread of domestic terrorism?- improved methods for recruiting new members-declining economies in various developing countries-civilian unrest due to government-enforced restrictions-colonial groups seeking independence from imperialistic powers At a deli counter, there are sandwiches with meat and vegetarian sandwiches. Kira is at the counter buying sandwiches for a picnic. In how many ways can she choose sandwiches if fewer than must be vegetarian sandwiches Solve |y + 2| > 6 im so confused A refrigerator recieves 240 V of electricity. If it use 32 A of current, what is the resistance of the refrigerator? Which is the length of the hypotenuse of the right triangle? Round your answer to the nearest tenth of a centimeter. Hint: Pythagorean Theorem: a^2+ b^2 = c^2 Use the zero product property to find the solutions to the equation 2x2 + x - 1 = 2a) x= -1/2 or x =2b) x= -2 or x =1/2c) x= -3/2 or x =1d) x= 1 or x= 3/2 1. What is the frequency of light with a wavelength of 1064 nm?2. How many photons of 1064 nm light are contained in a 535 Joules of this light? A solution of Cuso, is labelled 1.743 M. How much Cuso, in grams, must be used to make1.4957 liter of solution?Select one:O a. 416.1Ob. 0.007301O c. 166.6Od. 129.2 This table gives a few (x,y) pairs of a line in the coordinate plane. Two protons are released from rest, with only the electrostatic force acting. Which of the following statements must be true about them as they move apart? (There could be more than one correct choice.) A. Their electric potential energy keeps decreasing. B. Their acceleration keeps decreasing. C. Their kinetic energy keeps increasing. D. Their kinetic energy keeps decreasing. E. Their electric potential energy keeps increasing. A 40-year-old woman was recently diagnosed with type 2 diabetes. When asked about her diet, she reveals that she frequently consumes foods that are highly processed and high in calories at each meal. This individual would be classified as:__________ Write the equation for simple harmonic motion (x-t),(v-t), and find v at t=2s and t=3s if the object is initially at the right extreme of origin and moving in the negative x-direction. (A=2cm, T=8s) Through a microscope, you can see a cell plate beginning to develop across the middle of a cell and nuclei forming on either side of the cell plate. This cell is most likely Group of answer choices HELP BRAINLIEST UP FOR GRABS Jenny has some tiles in a bag. The tiles are of three different colors: purple, pink, and orange. Jenny randomly pulls a tile out of the bag, records the color, and replaces the tile in the bag. She does this 50 times. The results are recorded in the given table: Color of Tile Purple Pink Orange Number of times the tile is drawn 6 18 26 What is the experimental probability that Jenny will pull out a purple tile? fraction 6 over 50 fraction 44 over 50 fraction 6 over 44 fraction 18 over 44 Given that a function, g, has a domain of -20 x 5 and a range of -5 g(x) 45 and that g(0) = -2 and g(-9) = 6, select the statement that could be true for g. Please no random answers 10.Given the following, including the fact that ABC and CBD are supplementary, what is the value of m ABC and m ABC?m DBC=x10m ABC=x+30. P(n) models the probability, when rolling a pair of dice, of obtaining two numbers whose sum is n 2 6 7 P(n) 1/36 5/36 6/36 when does the probability increase faster? a)Between a sum of 2 and a sum of 6 b) Between a sum of 6 and a sum of 7 c)the probability increases at the same rate over both intervals