What techniques could be used to improve this sample diary entry to make it interesting and effective at sharing the experience? Check all that apply.

adding reasons why the speaker was afraid
adding some dialogue
adding more description about what was enjoyable about the camping trip
adding more information about bears
adding a description of the pop-up camper

Answer:

B and C

Explanation:

Because i took the assignment and i got it right

Answer:

adding some dialogue

adding more description about what was enjoyable about the camping trip

Explanation:

how do you start an essay

Which line from the epic poem best explains why Beowulf undertook his quest? The hero arose, surrounded closely by his powerful thanes. The hero arose, surrounded closely by his powerful thanes. Nobody tried to keep him from going, no elder denied him. Nobody tried to keep him from going, no elder denied him. If Grendel wins, it will be a gruesome day. If Grendel wins, it will be a gruesome day. In his day, he was the mightiest man on earth.

Which portion of this passage uses the sense of touch to create imagery?
“Even the insistent cough of the woman next to him wasn’t enough to draw his eyes away from the tiny type of the ancient book. It’s pages were brittle and felt like they could crumble at the slightest disturbance. He noticed the musty odor of each page as he carefully turned it over.”
A. Even the insistent cough of the woman next to him
B. It’s pages were brittle and felt like they could crumble at the slightest disturbance.
C. He noticed the musty odor of each page as he carefully turned it over
D. Draw his eyes away from the tiny type of the ancient book

What is haiku? Please answer

Write an Conclusion for '' an Fable for Tommrow

What is the cause described in this passage?
What was the effect of that cause?
My mother's sister, Maria Anna, had a good job as a
seamstress, and she took it upon herself to teach
[Giuseppe] the trade and get him a job. He developed a
real skill as a dressmaker.
- "Sicurella Family
from "Island of Hope, Island of Tears,"
Ellis Island National Monument Online
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write a letter to your friend telling about your your plans when school resumes. As in easy
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Based on the scenario and the image which non ergonomic practice is most likely the source of jaydens headaches.
A. He is not sitting up straight
B. His feet are not flat on the floor
C. His monitor is far below eye level
D. He is not resting his back against the chair

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Which statement best describes how the author
develops the point of view of the narrator?
1. The narrator's feelings of contentment show
that he is unaware of the dangers around him.
en, where snakes could scarcely approach
nyellow pumpkin. There were some
rows, full of fruit. I turned back the
e berries and ate a few. All about me giant
seen, were doing acrobatic feats among
d down the ploughed ground. There in the
-w very hard, but I could hear it singing its
see the tall grasses wave. The earth was
through my fingers. Queer little red bugs
und me. Their backs were polished
I could. Nothing happened. I did not
g that lay under the sun and felt it, like the
g more. I was entirely happy.
2. The narrator's observations of his
surroundings reflect his feelings of
peacefulness and freedom.
3. The description of the narrator shows that he
is excited and optimistic about his future in a
new place.
Which quotation from the passage supports the
answer you chose?
01. "All about me giant grasshoppers, twice as big
as any i had ever seen, were doing acrobatic
feats among the dried vines."

what does an intricate text mean on grammarly. if anybody doesnt mind i really need help i am willing to give you my account so you can help me understand

Hi guys can you tell me how I can improve this part of my essay? (I still need more paragraphs but I want to improve it as I go along.) Feel free to edit and change things it would also be nice if you give me advice on how I can make the next few paragraphs (or anything that can help me lol) Oh and word choice is also a thing I need advice on Here is the paragraph below :3 TYSM in advance


Friendship is a wonderful thing where humans interact with one another and develop a bond. It is built on trust dependence and the ability to rely on one another. There is a certain point however, where one so called “friend” oversteps the boundary of dependence and over relies on the other person. In this case, Lennie oversteps this boundary, becoming like a clinging parasite who can’t function while alone. Lennie knows that George dose many good things for him, but he still acts out. George not only has to

sacrifice a lot for Lennie he even pre plans things to do when Lennie gets himself into trouble.

For starters, Lennie acknowledges the fact that George dose so much for him and still refuses to change. His hallucination even stated George is "such a nice fella an' good to you. But you don’t never take no care" (Steinbeck 11). Lennie knows how well treated he is by George but he still can't control himself even for his best bud. Not only did he get himself in trouble once he did it twice. This truly shows the one-sidedness of this relationship. Additionally, His hallucination noted that "when he got a piece of a pie you always got half or more'n half" (Steinbeck 12). This shows how much George cares about Lenie and would go to lengths as even sacrificing a his own pleasure for him. I know for certain that when someone sacrifices there food for you it means that they really care for you or pity you. Even after George graciously gave many things to Lennie to give him pleasure, Lennie refuses to learn or change even though he clearly sees that George is being very kind to him. Moreover, he does all this for you and you just "stew the b'Jesus out of George all the time" (Steinbeck 16) His hallucination said. This proves that Lennie knows that he is not doing anything nice for George while Gorge is doing all these nice things for him. Lennie is intelligent enough to notice that George is supporting him and going out of his way to be kind to Lennie, while Lennie just takes and takes and takes and repays him in screwups and bad actions. As you can tell, Lennie knows that George is doing so much for him and that he is not repaying him fairly. This proves that he is not a good friend but a pericyte.



Additionally, George is not only being kind to Lennie, he is sacrificing a huge chunk of his life for him. For starters, Lennies hallucination retorted, this whole time "he coulda had such a good time if it wasn’t for you. He woulda took his pay an' raised **** in a ware house..." (Steinbeck 15). This shows the pleasurable life George could have had if it wasn't for the clinging weight of his parasitic so called friend Lennie. George could have had fun and lived his life worry free but he had a unnecessary responsibility witch was Lennie, that he was obligated to take care of. Additionally, Gorge even said himself that "If I was alone I could live so easy" (Steinbeck 42). This proves that George realizes what a parasitic burden Lennie is and the grim reality of the situation. This is what have could have possibly led him to killing Lennie. He finally noticed that Lennie could not change and rather than letting him suffer without him he did him a favor by ending his life. It was the last kind thing George did to Lennie. Furthermore, Lennies hallucination exclaimed that whenever there "was any ketchup, why he'd give it all to you" (Steinbeck 12). This is a perfect representation of how much George truly gives to the parasitic person he calls a friend. Lennie continuously gives his all just to get nothing- or worse than nothing- in return. Friendship is a give and take relationship that should be mutually shared between friends but in this instance we can clearly see that Lennie over stepped the boundary and takes more than what he gives. All and all, You can clearly see who is sacrificing more to maintain this toxic one sided friendship.

Read the excerpt from "The Crab That Played with the Sea." Which group of sentences from the excerpt best demonstrates the author's reason for writing?

What has happened recently in current events that you find interesting?

Is soccer practice a common noun?
Please provide an explanation.

Q.1) Read this short passage and answer the question below:


Cruising into a Driverless Future

By Chloe Reichel


Eerie as it may seem to drive alongside a car with no one behind the wheel, autonomous vehicles are poised to hit the roads in the next few years. A lawsuit between Uber and Waymo, Google’s self-driving car project, settled in February 2018 illustrates the fierce battle to develop driverless car technology. Many cars already employ semi-autonomous technology, such as parking assistance and lane monitoring. The National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA) suggests that automated vehicles could promote safety on the road. According to NHTSA’s Federal Automated Vehicles Policy, 94 percent of car accidents are linked to human choice or error. Automated vehicles, the NHTSA writes, could reduce the frequency of crashes by eliminating some human error on the roads. The policy indicates positive features of automated vehicles beyond safety, including potential environmental benefits and increased mobility for those otherwise unable to drive. The cutting-edge technology, however, presents ethical questions and other concerns. Some research included in this roundup indicates that the environmental effects of widespread adoption of autonomous vehicles might not be positive. Safety benefits are not so clear-cut either.


The author organizes this passage by—

A) comparing and contrasting different findings on autonomous vehicles

B) explaining the best way to research the safety of autonomous vehicles

C) presenting in chronological order the progress of autonomous vehicles

D) describing the outcome of extensive research on autonomous vehicles

Q.2) Which quotation challenges the idea that automated vehicles are a welcomed commodity?
A) “Automated vehicles, the NHTSA writes, could reduce the frequency of crashes by eliminating some human error on the roads.”
B) “Some research included in this roundup indicates that the environmental effects of widespread adoption of autonomous vehicles might not be positive. Safety benefits are not so clear-cut either. “
C) “Eerie as it may seem to drive alongside a car with no one behind the wheel, autonomous vehicles are poised to hit the roads in the next few years.”
D) “Many cars already employ semi-autonomous technology, such as parking assistance and lane monitoring.”

Write five descriptive phrases from the second paragraph that are especially effective at helping the reader see, taste, or feel the scene in the German Market.

But boredom made me sin. Once, at the
German Market, I stood before a rack of pies, my
sweet tooth gleaming and the juice of guilt wetting
my underarms. I gazed at the nine kinds of pie,
pecan and apple being my favorites, although
cherry looked good, and my dear, fat-faced
chocolate was always a good bet. I nearly wept
trying to decide which to steal and, forgetting the
flowery dust priests give off, the shadow of angels
and the proximity of God howling in the plumbing
underneath the house, sneaked a pie behind my
coffee-lid Frisbee and walked to the door, grinning
to the bald grocer whose forehead shone with a
window of light

Can someone help me write a fictional narrative essay it’s needs a lesson learned and It should be fiction

PLEASEEE HELP ME I ONLY HAVE 6 MINUTES LEFT PLEASE HELPP ME
Read this short passage and answer the questions below:

Excerpt from A Study in Scarlet
By Conan Doyle

In the year 1878 I took my degree of Doctor of Medicine of the University of London and proceeded to Netley to go through the course prescribed for surgeons in the army. Having completed my studies there, I was duly attached to the Fifth Northumberland Fusiliers as Assistant Surgeon. The regiment was stationed in India at the time, and before I could join it, the second Afghan war had broken out. On landing at Bombay, I learned that my corps had advanced through the passes and was already deep in the enemy’s country. I followed, however, with many other officers who were in the same situation as myself, and succeeded in reaching Candahar in safety, where I found my regiment, and at once entered upon my new duties. The campaign brought honors and promotion to many, but for me it had nothing but misfortune and disaster. I was removed from my brigade and attached to the Berkshires, with whom I served at the fatal battle of Maiwand. There I was struck on the shoulder by a Jezail bullet, which shattered the bone and grazed the subclavian artery. I should have fallen into the hands of the murderous Ghazis had it not been for the devotion and courage shown by Murray, my orderly, who threw me across a pack-horse, and succeeded in bringing me safely to the British lines. Worn with pain, and weak from the prolonged hardships which I had undergone, I was removed, with a great train of wounded sufferers, to the base hospital at Peshawar. Here I rallied, and had already improved so far as to be able to walk about the wards, and even to bask a little upon the verandah, when I was struck down by enteric fever. For months my life was despaired of, and when at last I came to myself and became convalescent, I was so weak and emaciated that a medical board determined that not a day should be lost in sending me back to England. I was dispatched, accordingly, in the troopship “Orontes,” and landed a month later on Portsmouth jetty, with my health irretrievably ruined.
The author uses the words “when I was struck down” to convey what to the reader?
A) That the fever made the narrator really sick, causing him permanent health issues.
B) That the narrator was afflicted by illness and fell to the ground.
C) Somebody hit him because he was sick.
D) That he was attacked in the battle but survived.

what the summary of chapter 16 of mariposa

12. Her little sister was just
slow on a bike.
to
two
too

Why all filipino love boxing?​

What is the meaning of the word alien as it is used in the title of the poem? What is the meaning as it is used in line 11?

8. American but hyphenated 9. viewed by Anglos as perhaps exotic, 10. perhaps inferior, definitely different, 11. viewed by Mexicans as alien​

PLZ HELP THIS IS DUE TODAY Write a one paragraph reflective narrative it can be a historical event

what reason does penelope give odysseus for having tested him in this way

A summary is a shortened version of a text. It retells all the important parts.

true
false

What is mine but people use it more?

Riddle

Please help
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Describe the definition of life in your own words.

Read the following sonnet.
Then, write an explanation of how the structure of the poem contributes to its overall meaning.
Passage
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration find,
Or bends with the remover to remove:
Ono; it is an ever-fixed mark,
That looks on tempests, and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
-- William Shakespeare, "Sonnet 116

I need this one, FAST PLEASE AND THANKYOU!!
What is Maya Angelou's purpose in writing the poem "Caged Bird?"

A.To show the terrible effects of not being free.

B.To encourage people to capture birds and put them in cages.

C.To shows that people can adapt to a lack of freedom.

D.To admire the beauty of birds.