Read the following excerpts from the draft and revision of the Declaration of Independence:
DRAFT:
[W]e have reminded them of the circumstances of our emigration & settlement here, no one of which could warrant so strange a pretension: that these were effected at the expense of our own blood & treasure, unassisted by the wealth or strength of Great Britain: that in constituting indeed our several forms of government, we had adopted one common king, thereby laying a foundation for perpetual league & amity with them: but that submission to their parliament was no part of our constitution nor ever in idea, if history be credited: and we have appealed to their native justice and magnanimity, as well as to the ties of our common kindred to disavow these usurpation which were likely to interrupt our correspondence & connection.
REVISION:
We have reminded them of the circumstances of our emigration and settlement here. We have appealed to their native justice and magnanimity, and we have conjured them by the ties of our common kindred to disavow these usurpation which would inevitably interrupt our connections and correspondence.
How does the revision support the purpose of the declaration better than the draft?
A.The revision uses more appeals to kairos, conveying the immediacy of the need for independence.
B.The revision uses more emotional language than the draft, conveying the urgency of the issue at hand.
C.The revision is more concise and logical than the draft, conveying the message more quickly and clearly.
D.The revision uses more figurative language, conveying the emotional impact of the revolutionary efforts more effectively.

Answer:

C. The revision is more concise and logical than the draft, conveying the message more quickly and clearly.

Explanation:

The revision of the draft from the Declaration of Independence is more concise and logical than the draft, conveying the message more quickly and clearly.

When a sentence is concise, it says a lot in only a few words. We can see that the passage from the draft is just one very long sentence. When we try to read it, we find it difficult to follow what is being said because of its length. The revision is actually a shortened version of the draft; it consists of one sentence from the beginning of the draft and one from the ending. As these two sentences are shorter, we don't have any trouble figuring out what the author is saying.

This is why option C is the correct one.

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BRUTUS. Remember March, the ides of March, remember.

Did not great Julius bleed for justice’ sake?

What villain touched his body, that did stab,

And not for justice? What, shall one of us,

That struck the foremost man of all this world

But for supporting robbers, shall we now

Contaminate our fingers with base bribes,

And sell the mighty space of our large honours

For so much trash as may be graspèd thus?

I had rather be a dog and bay the moon

Than such a Roman.



–The Tragedy of Julius Caesar,
William Shakespeare

Which statements best interpret the allusion used in the passage? Check all that apply.

The ides means “bad news.”
The ides of March is March 15.
This is a cultural and historical allusion.
There are several references to the ides.
The ides of March signals Caesar’s death.
Shakespeare used an old method of dates.
The play was based on historical events surrounding the murder of Julius Caesar.

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Read the excerpt from act 1 of The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street. GOODMAN She's crazy. Look I can explain that. Please . . . I can really explain that . . . She's making it up anyway. (then he shouts) I tell you she's making it up! Which element of drama is highlighted in this excerpt? the character of Goodman the setting of Goodman's house the setting of Goodman's neighborhood the character of the woman Goodman speaks of

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Sabrina is reading a nonfiction text with content and vocabulary that can be difficult to understand at times. What is the best strategy for Sabrina to use to increase her understanding of the text?

Sabrina can skip any words that she does not know.
Sabrina can link the text to another text that she has already read.
Sabrina can slow her pace of reading when she reaches a difficult part of the text.
Sabrina can predict what information will be gained from the text by looking at the cover.

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which of the following people is doing something profusely?
A).A driver who glances in her rearview mirror.
B).A boy who sneaks a cookie from the cookie jar.
C).A man who purchases a shirt that is on sale.
D).A child who cannot stop weeping.​

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your friends what you did
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Which of the characters would most likely be considered to have a Spartan attitude?
the Professor
Harry
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In act I, scene III, of Macbeth, the witches address Macbeth as Thane of Glamis. When they foretell that Macbeth will become Thane of Cawdor and king, he is bewildered. Soon after, a soldier informs him that Macbeth is now the Thane of Cawdor. Macbeth wonders to himself whether all the prophecies will come true.

Which lines in the excerpt show that Macbeth is on the verge of giving in to temptation, knowing very well that he is considering committing a terrible crime?

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Which of the following is a reason to use parallel sentence structures in a literary analysis essay?

Right away, from the door, I saw that the place had been ransacked. Drawers were open, things strewn all over the floor. Everywhere objects were overturned. My eyes took in a scene of terrible pillage.

Then I walked into Mr. and Mrs. Frank's bedroom. On the floor, amidst the chaos of papers and books, my eye lit on the little red-orange checkered, cloth-bound diary that Anne had received from her father on her thirteenth birthday. I pointed it out to Elli. Obeying my gesture, she leaned down and picked it up for me, putting it into my hands. I remembered how happy Anne had been to receive this little book to write her private thoughts in. I knew how precious her diary was to Anne. My eyes scanned the rubble for more of Anne's writings, and I saw the old accounting books and many more writing papers that Elli and I had given to her when she had run out of pages in the checkered diary. Elli was still very scared, and looked to me for direction. I told Elli, "Help me pick up all Anne's writings."
Which theme can be inferred from this excerpt?
A. The Nazi officers destroyed the Franks’ belongings.
B. Miep is determined to remember her friends.
C. Writing can be an emotional release for youth.
D. Treasure can be salvaged in the midst of ruin.

38 Which word from the article means "average or uninspired"?
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F jumbled (paragraph 3)
G mediocre (paragraph 4)
H bleary-eyed (paragraph 7)
J pervasive (paragraph 9)
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A. question his own sanity
B. Thinking of leaving Kitty
C. Longing for Mrs.Wessington
D. Determining if he needs help

perfunctory means?
A).dolled up.
B).of sound mind.
C).blotted out.
D).pro forma.​

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Which sentence from the passage is an example of hyperbole?

a. I don’t enjoy role-play games. (sentence 3)

b. I don’t read or watch fantasy or science fiction. (sentence 4)

c. Nobody ever gives me a second look. (sentence 9)

d. Well, the answer is simple. (sentence 16)

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Orchids are wonderful flowers for a beginner to raise. They do not need a lot of water or light. They come in all kinds of bright colors and are perfectly fine in a dim room. There are over 25,000 species of orchids to choose from, and there are videos and books about how to take care of each species. Orchids are easy to find in gardening stores because they are so popular.

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A.) When buying an orchid, it is important to pick the right species.
B.) Orchids may look beautiful, but they are very difficult to care for.
C.) Orchid roots will develop fungus and rot if they are watered too often.
D.) Morning glories and sunflowers are much easier to raise than orchids.
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