I need someone to fix my grammar and highlight any punctuation or mechanics errors.

Answer:

I think, The words in the brackets should be added or corrected.

Explanation:

I am going to choose letter D. So, I pick (an) English class because I really need to learn English and let my parents learn from me. And if I am going to transfer from Washtenaw College(,) I would like to go to University of Michigan because I really wish to go there, but still the payment is too expensive for me, and I really wish to be studying there (a) pharmacist or at (least) laboratory, so why I pick (a) laboratory?

Because my (mom's) majors are laboratory, all my family support me go to pharmacist, laboratory, or

dentist but I pick pharmacist. And I really like to be (a) pharmacist to be the White Coat Because my dream is to wear it and show my parents that I am strong, and I (did) it. I have (an) auntie(;) she is a pharmacist and the other auntie dental and, I (have) got my cousin One of them is (a) lawyer and the other is Nurse and I have a sister she is Radiation therapy. That is why I picked (a) pharmacist. And I am happy with that and my family (is) proud of me.

Answer:

I am going to choose letter D. I picked English class because I really need to learn English and allow my parents to learn from me. If I am going to transfer from Washtenaw College, I would like to go to The University of Michigan, because I really wish to go to that University, but unfortunately the payment is expensive for me. I wish to study as a pharmacist or at least in a laboratory. You may be asking why I chose laboratory as an option? That's due to how my mom's majors are in that category. My whole family supports me to go to either one as mentioned before, but I choose to be a pharmacist because I have a dream to put on the white coat and prove to my parents that I am strong and well accomplished. I have an auntie that is also a pharmacist, and my other auntie is working as a dentist, I also have a cousin that is a lawyer and another cousin that is a nurse, I would also like to mention that my sister does Radiation therapy, these are what my inspirations of being a pharmacist come from and I am happy and thrilled about that and including the fact that my family is proud of me

i hope this helped!!  I rephrased some words by the way :)

For which of these texts would bullet points be an effective formatting choice?
A newspaper opinion column
A list of required items
A train timetable
A postcard to a friend

Select the correct answer
Mason is evaluating the pros and cons of a career in wildlife photography. The pros are that he would get to work outdoors, travel around the world, and encounter wildlife.
The con is that he would be away from his family and friends for many months in a year. How does evaluating the benefits and disadvantages help Mason evaluate his
career choice?
A. He can find a career that pays him the most.
B. He can find a career that's most suitable for him.
C. He can find a career that's most challenging for him.
D. He can find a career that's most popular.

What is one way to find relevant information about a topic in an online search?
Use very general search terms.
Use only government websites.
Use educational sites.
Use specific key words and phrases.

How does sametta’s Story in paragraph two contribute to the text?

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Most enzymes fall into which group?
lyases
hydrolases
transferases
isomerases

Tommy wakes up ( wake up) at 7:30

The incentive scheme that rules sumo is intricate and extraordinarily powerful. Each wrestler maintains a ranking that affects every slice of his life; how much money he makes, how large an entourage he carries, how much he gets to eat, sleep, and otherwise take advantage of his success. The sixty-six highest-ranked wrestlers in Japan, comprising the makuuchi and juryo divisions, make up the sumo elite. A wrestler near the top of this elite pyramid may earn millions and is treated like royalty. Any wrestler in the top forty earns at least $170,000 a year. The seventieth-ranked wrestler in Japan, meanwhile, earns only $15,000 a year. Life isn’t very sweet outside the elite. Low-ranked wrestlers must tend to their superiors, preparing their meals and cleaning their quarters, and even soaping up their hardest-to-reach body parts. So ranking is everything.

Which sentence from the excerpt best supports the idea that the high-ranking sumo wrestlers enjoy many luxuries?
The incentive scheme that rules sumo is intricate and extraordinarily powerful.
The sixty-six highest-ranked wrestlers in Japan, comprising the makuuchi and juryo divisions, make up the sumo elite.
A wrestler near the top of this elite pyramid may earn millions and is treated like royalty.
The seventieth-ranked wrestler in Japan, meanwhile, earns only $15,000 a year.

Read the following text and answer the question that follows.
Georgina's life drastically changed since she brought home the puppy. Spot constantly needed to be walked and his pet food was very expensive.
Georgina's patience and her wallet were stretched thin.
Identify the rhetorical device illustrated in the bold-faced sentence.
Antithesis
Figurative language
Synecdoche
Zeugma

A) Chapter 4 is titled "Mastering Self-management".

1. Why is this a more accurate term for commonly-used "time management" term?

Why would reading about positive
characters of your own ethnicity
build confidence?

Fill in the blanks in the sentence below, choosing the verbs that make the sentence coherent.
We
to the beach as soon as we
our lunch.
O are going to walk / pack
O walked/packs
O walks/are packing
O are walking / will pack

A monument in a park is shaped like a square pyramid. The dimensions are shown in the net.

What is the surface area of the monument, including the base?

4 m²

12 m²

14 m²

24 m²

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Which of the following lines from "The Cremation of Sam McGee" best supports a
possible theme for the poem?

nctuate the following sentences:
shivani and nitin got interested in yogawhich camera on a mat and close your eyes following sentence ​

Read the excerpt from Animal Farm and the passage on the history of the Soviet Union.

On the third Sunday after Snowball's expulsion, the animals were somewhat surprised to hear Napoleon announce that the windmill was to be built after all. He did not give any reason for having changed his mind, but merely warned the animals that this extra task would mean very hard work, it might even be necessary to reduce their rations. The plans, however, had all been prepared, down to the last detail. A special committee of pigs had been at work upon them for the past three weeks. The building of the windmill, with various other improvements, was expected to take two years.

That evening Squealer explained privately to the other animals that Napoleon had never in reality been opposed to the windmill. On the contrary, it was he who had advocated it in the beginning, and the plan which Snowball had drawn on the floor of the incubator shed had actually been stolen from among Napoleon's papers.

In November 1927, Joseph Stalin launched his "revolution from above” by setting two extraordinary goals for Soviet domestic policy: rapid industrialization and collectivization of agriculture. His aims were to erase all traces of the capitalism that had entered under the New Economic Policy and to transform the Soviet Union as quickly as possible, without regard to cost, into an industrialized and completely socialist state.

Stalin's First Five-Year Plan, adopted by the party in 1928, called for rapid industrialization of the economy, with an emphasis on heavy industry. It set goals that were unrealistic—a 250 percent increase in overall industrial development and a 330 percent expansion in heavy industry alone. All industry and services were nationalized, managers were given predetermined output quotas by central planners, and trade unions were converted into mechanisms for increasing worker productivity. Many new industrial centers were developed, particularly in the Ural Mountains, and thousands of new plants were built throughout the country. But because Stalin insisted on unrealistic production targets, serious problems soon arose. With the greatest share of investment put into heavy industry, widespread shortages of consumer goods occurred.

How do the circumstances in the Animal Farm excerpt relate to the events in the historical passage?

Napoleon has stolen the plans for the windmill from Snowball, just as Stalin took his ideas for industrialization and collectivization from Trotsky.
Napoleon wants to make the farm an industrial power, just as Stalin wanted to make the Soviet Union an industrial power no matter the sacrifices.
Napoleon uses Squealer to communicate his ideas to the animals, just as Stalin used his assistants to spread propaganda to the people.
Napoleon sets forth a five-year plan to build the windmill, just as Stalin launched several five-year plans to build up industry and agriculture in the Soviet Union.

Read the excerpt from Immigrant Kids, by Russell
Freedman.
Based on the concrete details in this excerpt, which
word best describes how the immigrants felt?
Men, women, and children were packed into dark,
foul-smelling compartments. They slept in narrow
bunks stacked three high. They had no showers, no
lounges, and no dining rooms. Food served from huge
kettles was dished into dinner pails provided by the
steamship company. Because steerage conditions
were crowded and uncomfortable, passengers spent
as much time as possible up on deck.
anxious
O awkward
O embarrassed
distressed

hey christmas quote!!!!
" it doesn't matter if your rich, it doesn't matter if your poor, it doesn't matter if your parents don't have job, or there divorced, or you have no money because of bills or loans, it doesn't even matter if your homeless. because all that matters is giving the gift of love this holiday season even if its small like donating a dollar to your local charity or buying something your family really needs, you don't even have to buy it even a simple hug will do. because we all know its been difficult for all of us but everyone just needs a little love this holiday"

quote of the day 7

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sorry i didn't post the quote yesterday i had exams
happy holidays to all

write a eulogy for beowulf

“Comrades!” he cried. “You do not imagine, I hope, that we pigs are doing this in a spirit of selfishness and privilege? Many of us actually dislike milk and apples. I dislike them myself. Our sole object in taking these things is to preserve our health. Milk and apples (this has been proved by Science, comrades) contain substances absolutely necessary to the well-being of a pig. We pigs are brainworkers. The whole management and organization of this farm depend on us. Day and night we are watching over your welfare. It is for YOUR sake that we drink that milk and eat those apples. Do you know what would happen if we pigs failed in our duty? Jones would come back! Yes, Jones would come back!” –Animal Farm, George Orwell Which statement best explains how the details in the passage develop the central idea that people in power use deceit to control others? The details show that Squealer really believes everything he is saying. The details show that Squealer lets the other animals do whatever they please. The details show how Squealer proves that he is not lying by saying that he does not even like milk and apples. The details show how Squealer turns unpleasant truths into persuasive lies to control the animals.

1.
If the animals worked together and did not ignore the Terrible Things,
how would the story have been different?

The ______ model turned heads when she walked down the runway.

Which of the following words has a negative connotation when used in the above sentence? (5 points)

a. svelte
b. slender
c. gaunt
d. slim

A dog sled team in a race through snowy tundra. The dogs are wearing red coats to keep warm and booties on their feet.
Why do you think people try to preserve traditions? Select all that apply.

to honor their past
to make their lives more meaningful
to see that history is not forgotten or lost
to avoid too many changes in the world

use what you have to read to summarize jackie robinson story in two to three sentences

Part A

Read these sentences from Paragraph 2 of the passage.

These words sank deep into my heart, stirred up sentiments within that lay slumbering, and called into existence an entirely new train of thought. It was a new and special revelation, explaining dark and mysterious things, with which my youthful understanding had struggled, but struggled in vain. I now understood what had been to me a most perplexing difficulty—….

Which definition best expresses the connotative meaning of the word youthful as the author uses it in the second sentence?


sensible

ignorant

brand new

active
Question 2
Part B

What effect does the author's use of the word youthful have on the meaning of this passage?


It shows that Douglass's new awareness of how owners maintain control over slaves allows him to better understand how to improve his situation.

It shows that Douglass knows that he is too young to know what is best for him.

It shows that Mr. Auld is able to manipulate Douglass into obeying his orders by taking advantage of his good nature and lack of experience in life.

It shows that Douglass's youth makes him more courageous than he might otherwise have been.

At last [White Fang’s] nose touched the canvas. He waited. Nothing happened. Then he smelled the strange fabric, saturated with the man-smell. He closed on the canvas with his teeth and gave a gentle tug. Nothing happened, though the adjacent portions of the tepee moved. He tugged harder. There was a greater movement. It was delightful. He tugged still harder, and repeatedly, until the whole tepee was in motion.
How is White Fang’s character developed in this excerpt?
A. through interaction with another character
B. through interaction with the setting
C. through a plot conflict
D. through the author’s opinion

Which statement best explains the figurative language in the bolded lines?
Cassius uses hyperbole to exaggerate how important Brutus is to the assassination plot.
O Cassius uses a metaphor to convince Casca that Caesar is preying on the weak, vulnerable people of Rome.
O Cassius uses personification to compare Caesar to a sheep that is easily controlled by the conspirators.
Cassius uses a simile to compare the people of Rome to a pack of hungry wolves.

the "iron giraffe" in nya's village? what is its purpose? 70 POINTS HELPP!!!!!!!!