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Dear Mark Warner,
My name is Cody Sprague and, I have emailed you today; I come to you from a school assignment. I'm, asked whether I agree with raising the legal driving age. I agree with this law because; passing a bill to raise the driving age is an effective way to decrease teenage fatalities in traffic accidents. Firstly, teenagers are less likely to wear seatbelts. According to research and statistics show that teenagers are less likely to wear seatbelts. People would argue and say that teenagers are less likely to wear seatbelts, whether driving or not. Teenage drivers spend the mass majority of their time in cars.
Secondly, teenage drivers are driving under the influence of alcohol. Research states 70% of teenage drivers who died in underage drinking and driving accidents didn't use a seat belt. Teenagers still can get their hands on alcohol.
Lastly, teenage drivers still talk on their phones while driving. Statistics tell us that Talking on a cell phone can double the likelihood of an accident and will slow a young driver's reaction time to that of a 70-year-old.
In conclusion, the legal driving age for Virginia; should be raised because for the above reasons. Please consider my reasoning why the driving age should be raised.
Many thanks,
Cody Sprague

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Dear Mark Warner,

My name is Cody Sprague. I emailed you today about a school assignment in which I was asked whether or not I agreed with raising the legal driving age. Personally, I agree with this law because passing a bill to raise the driving age is an effective way to decrease the number of teenage fatalities and traffic accidents. First and foremost, teenagers think they are invincible, so they are less likely to wear a seat belt. people would argue that teenagers would not wear a seat belt whether they were driving or not. However, studies show that teenager drivers spent the mass majority of there time in their cars.

Secondly, a large quantity of teenagers are driving under the influence. Research show that 70% of teenage driver who have died in a traffic accident under the influence were not wearing a seat belt. Teenagers now more than ever can get a hold of alcohol.

Lastly, teenage drivers still talk on their phones while driving. Statistics have proven that talking on a cell phone can double the likely hood of an accident and could even slow a young drivers reaction time to that of a 70-year-old.

In conclusion, the legal driving age for virginia should be raised to help to prevent all my previously stated reasons. Please consider my reasoning and if you agree, please, help to make a difference.

Many thanks,

Cody Sprague

Why is the idea of Egyptian death rituals significant to Annie's father How do you think he would expect to be appraised?

Read the excerpt from The Mother of America:

George Washington is frequently considered the "Father of America." Likewise, his wife, Martha Washington, could also be considered the "Mother of America," as demonstrated by her roles as the general's wife and the first lady.

During the American Revolution, Martha Washington earned the title of "Mother of America" for her caring nature as the general's wife. She was also very brave. Despite the danger of kidnapping, Martha refused to abandon her home, Mount Vernon, in Virginia. When Martha did leave the plantation for periods of time, she traveled to the military camps where Washington was staying. First, Martha had to be vaccinated so that she would not suffer from smallpox. Once she was inoculated, Martha made the risky trip to camp. British and American soldiers roamed the countryside, and capture was a real possibility. Nevertheless, Martha arrived at each winter camp. She acted as confidant and secretary to George Washington, who believed that her presence was crucial. She encouraged the soldiers, helped their wives, and comforted those who were wounded. One of her key roles was also to entertain important visitors to the camp. Occasionally, Martha Washington even represented George at events he could not attend. Martha used her position to contribute to fundraising efforts for military supplies in 1780 and knit socks for the soldiers herself. Overall, her care and attention to others' needs made her the "Mother of America" during the American Revolution.

What evidence does the author use to support the idea that Martha Washington should be considered the "Mother of America"?

A. British and American soldiers roamed the countryside, and capture was a real possibility.
it is not B.
C. First, Martha had to be vaccinated so that she would not suffer from smallpox.
D. She encouraged the soldiers, helped their wives, and comforted those who were wounded.

Read this sentence from the passage.

According to the World Water Council, while the population has tripled in the twentieth century, the use of water resources has grown six-fold.

Which BEST explains why this evidence is credible?

A. It lists specific numbers.

B. It is about recent history.

C. It is information from a reliable source.

D. It is the opinion of an important
group.

23. What is the TRANSITIVE VERB in this sentence?: My brother turned off the lights and went to sleep. *

A ) sleep
B) turned off
C) and
D) went

13. "Are you going to the cinema?" he asked me.
He asked me that if I

.... he is rich and famous he lives in a modest house in the village

plz help me in this passive voice.​

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Type of vehicles you can expect on rural roads
Scooters
Bicycles
Tractors
Mopeds

Choose the correct word to complete the sentence.
When the bee couldn't find _____
nest, it rested on a flower.
A. its
B
mine
C. hers
D
their

The indirect speech of "She said,"Water boils at 100 degree Celsius." is...
1) She said that water boiled at 100 degrees Celsius.
2) She says that water boils at 100 degree Celsius.
3) She said that water boils at 100 degree Celsius.
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Which two strategies does the author use to support the argument?
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A numismatist might spend his or her evening

4. Some people believe that students should be given a large amount of home work so that they can learn independently. Others, disagree and think that they should be engaged in social activities rather than school work at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experiences. LOTT in the best policy"​

Which type of figurative language does the sentence contain
I tried to finish the meal, but the burned meat was as tough as leather, and I began to wonder whether I was eating someone’s old sneakers

Help plz fast due 1159

Write a paragraph of description on anything that comes to mind without using evaluative adjectives or adverbs.

adapted from Dead Souls
by Nikolai Gogol

Select the correct answer.
How does the passage transform the archetype of the hero's journey?

A.
It contains an adventure or quest, but the hero is unconventional.
B.
It features a search for something valuable, but the hero is unaware of what it is.
C.
It describes a hero who is changed, but he does not undergo a revelation.
D.
It presents obstacles to the hero, but they are insurmountable.

5. Use context clues to determine which of the following words is the best synonym for mite. (1 point)
O a bed bug
O a coin of little value
Ophysical strength
O possibility

~Easy Points ~ ...... wht does it mean to plagiarize ?.....(stup!d answers will be deleted)

Highlight the reference in the sentence: Martin gave Anna a smart phone. She loved the newest version .

60 PTS PLZ HELP
Which method of developing characters relies on descriptions of a character's words or actions to show the character's personality traits?

direct characterization

instant characterization

delayed characterization

indirect characterization

Identity the choice the best answer the question
in which sentence does the verb agree with the subject?
A. The tone and pitch of the sparrow's song is pure and dear
B. Hermit thrushes and wood thrushes a delight to hear
C. The laik and the robin are loved for their music.
D. Sunflower seeds or corn attract a variety of birds

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SEE ANSWER

A. PHONETICS

I. Choose the word that has the underlined part pronounced differently from the others.

1. A. neighbor B. cough C. although D. drought

2. A. entertain B. rain C. air D. strain

3. A. try B. facility C. typhoon D. supply

4. A. supermarket B. ruler C. pollution D. urban

5. A. nature B. migrant C. facility D. away

6. A. traffic B. relative C. tragedy D. jam

7. A. apartment B. offer C. prefer D. another

8. A. nature B. pressure C. urban D. supply

9. A. create B. peaceful C. increase D. easily

10. A. accessible B. pressure C. illness D. success

Pls pls pls help it’s urgent give you brainiest and 50 points do I’ll give you another 50 too but pls help
Could anyone help me write my speech
It’s about the following questions:
Introduce yourself
What did you learn and what did you gain?
What do you think about the program?
How did you see program online
Talk about the coach
What are your aspirations after the program?
Would you advise your colleagues to participate?
How was your relationship with students from all regions of the kingdom?

I will explain and you write based on what I said I’m not good at writing tbh. Just take my answers and change the words delete add and if you have any questions feel free to ask

So basically I’ve joined this science program called future doctor and they taught us all about the body and how it works I did undoubtedly learn a lot and gained a lot of new information and meat a lot of smart and creative people along the way. I thought to was a great program and it was such a fun and great experience and it was a great way to spend my summer. I think it was fine that it was online though I think it would have been
Better if it was in real life since we would all be in a lab and we could try out the experiment and see the results for ourselves and I would have gotten to know a lot of people but hi with the whole situation going around. The coach was honestly amazing she did everything expected from her she showed us videos ans explained properly ans she taught us in an engaging way and even though it was online I truly thought it was fun and she would constantly ask us if we had any questions or any comments or suggestions she would also encourage us to do our best. She was also very understanding. After I have finished the program I feel more interested in biology I also feel like I wanna learn more in the future I always wanted to be a doctor when I grow up and this course sure did help boost my motivation to go for it. Yes! I would advice them to join it if they’re into biology and stuff and if they’re not into that then they offer more for engineering imputed science.. etc I truly think it was a great way to spend your time learn new info and get to know new people at the same time. The relationship with everyone was nice but I do feel like I would’ve been closer to them if we were in real life since we would be working together ans seeing each other all the time but everyone were nice and I’m so happy to have gotten to know everyone there

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What does the author mean when he says that George Tomkyns Chesney, the author of "The Battle of Dorking," was "not motivated by literary ambition"?

What is the main purpose for visual aids?

A: How about....(go) to the park? B:I'd prefer...(stay) in and....(watch) a DVD

please use ur own words i beg !

If anyone has experienced any of these pls help so I can get a idea please !!!

excerpt from Of Plymouth Plantation by William Bradford


An Understanding with the Indians (1621)


All this while the Indians came skulking about them, and would sometimes show themselves aloof off, but when any approached near them, they would run away. And once they stole away their tools where they had been at work and were gone to dinner. But about the 16th of March, a certain Indian came boldly amongst them and spoke to them in broken English, which they could well understand but marveled at it. At length they understood by discourse with him, that he was not of these parts, but belonged to the eastern parts where some English ships came to fish, with whom he was acquainted and could name sundry of them by their names, amongst whom he had got his language. He became profitable to them in acquainting them with many things concerning the state of the country in the east parts where he lived, which was afterwards profitable unto them; as also of the people here, of their names, number and strength, of their situation and distance from this place, and who was chief amongst them. His name was Samoset. He told them also of another Indian whose name was Squanto, a native of this place, who had been in England and could speak better English than himself.


Being after some time of entertainment and gifts dismissed, a while after he came again, and five more with him, and they brought again all the tools that were stolen away before, and made way for the coming of their great Sachem, called Massasoit. Who, about four or five days after, came with the chief of his friends and other attendance, with the aforesaid Squanto. With whom, after friendly entertainment and some gifts given him, they made a peace with him (which hath now continued this 24 years) in these terms:


​That neither he nor any of his should injure or do hurt to any of their people.

That if any of his did hurt to any of theirs, he should send the offender, that they might punish him.

That if anything were taken away from any of theirs, he should cause it to be restored; and they should do the like to his.

If any did unjustly war against him, they would aid him; if any did war against them, he should aid them.

He should send to his neighbors confederates to certify them of this, that they might not wrong them, but might be likewise comprised in the conditions of peace.

That when their men came to them, they should leave their bows and arrows behind them.

After these things he returned to his place called Sowams, some 40 miles from this place, but Squanto continued with them and was their interpreter and was a special instrument sent of God for their good beyond their expectation. He directed them how to set their corn, where to take fish, and to procure other commodities, and was also their pilot to bring them to unknown places for their profit, and never left them till he died. He was a native of this place, and scarce any left alive besides himself. He was carried away with divers others by one Hunt, a master of a ship, who thought to sell them for slaves in Spain; but he got away for England and was entertained by a merchant in London, and employed to Newfoundland and other parts, and lastly brought hither into these parts by one Mr. Dermer, a gentleman employed by Sir Ferdinando Gorges and others for discovery and other designs in these parts.


Readers can infer that Samoset’s visit to the community improves the relationship between the colony members and the Native Americans.


Which detail from the passage best supports this inference?



1. “He was a native of this place, and scarce any left alive besides himself.”


2. “After these things he returned to his place called Sowams, some 40 miles from this place, but Squanto continued with them and was their interpreter…”


3. “He told them also of another Indian whose name was Squanto, a native of this place, who had been in England and could speak better English than himself.”


4. “With whom, after friendly entertainment and some gifts given him, they made a peace with him (which hath now continued this 24 years)…”