Answer:
Here's constructive criticism.
Explanation:
So, I'll start off by saying; sorry if anything I say sounds rude. This is completely constructive and is only being said so you can learn from it.
To begin with, it just seems all over the place. I'm having a hard time telling what exactly this is supposed to be about. Try to organize things when you right, it'll make it easier for your teacher to read.
Secondly, your puncuation needs to be corrected. Go back through and try adding commas and periods (they seem the most neccesary here.)
I would add more because surely it still needs corrections outside of what I listed, but I'll only continue if you want me to. Have a great day!
what is a synonym for changes ?❤️
A synonym for 'change(s)' could be 'amend'. I hope this helped ^^
Answer:
Some synonyms are :
Traditions, shifts, develops, and adjusts.
Please help me with this I need it by today
Answer:
Icy fingers gripped my arms in the darkness... I shrieked, flinging my arm away. Edging to the other side of the bed, I fumbled for the light switch. There was no use screaming for help, I was alone in the big, empty house. Whatever this was, I would have to face it myself. The light clicked on, and I was blinded, my bleary eyes adjusting to the darkness. Turning, I looked at my attacker to find...
A gnome? He looked like something straight off the neighbor's lawn, with pointy ears, a little pointed hat, and a portly belly.
"Come." the gnome said in a gruff voice. "There isn't much time to explain."
"Explain what?" I said, still in my pajamas and very confused. "Where are we going?"
"The darklands, of course, your highness. Your dragon awaits you."
"I think you have me mistaken with someone else. I'm not a monarch, I'm just a sleepy kid. And I sure don't own a dragon." The gnome sighed, and touched my head. It all came flooding back. The eternal war, my dragon, the fight against the darkness to save the world above.
"Shall we, Gnolon?" I said, swinging my feet out of the bed.
"Indeed, your grace."he replied. And with that, we set off.
Answer:
I'm assuming the Narrative is the starting line.
Explanation:
Icy fingers gripped my arms in the darkness, my heart pounded fearfully in my chest, I needed to run but I couldn't move. I struggled against the harsh grip, no doubt I would be left with bruises if I ever managed to escape, I kicked out blindly, connecting with something apparently living because my arm was freed. I forced my feet to move, running down the dark corridor as fast as I could, searching for a door or light anywhere. I felt like the walls were closing in as I heard the heavy footsteps behind me, I sped up with energy I didn't know I had. I felt my lungs start to burn as exhaustion slowed my feet, but I had to push on, I couldn't be caught, I just couldn't.
Something brushed my arm and I yanked it away out of reflex, hearing an angry snarl behind me. I spotted what could possibly be the outline of a door, it was a short distance away, but I had no idea if I could make it in time. I couldn't tell if the pounding in my ears was my erratic heartbeat or the impending footsteps as they got closer, closer, closer. The door was so close, I could almost reach it, almost, I stretched my hand towards it, reaching desperately for safety. There was no door, it was a trick of my desperate mind, I was cornered, there was no escape. I felt the icy fingers on my arm again and finally gave up.
Sorry if its a bit dark, but it was super fun to write, I hope this is what you needed.
Read the excerpt from "The Most Dangerous Game."
Bleak darkness was blacking out the sea and jungle when Rainsford sighted the lights. He came upon them as he turned a crook in the coast line, and his first thought was that he had come upon a village, for there were many lights. But as he forged along he saw to his great astonishment that all the lights were in one enormous building—a lofty structure with pointed towers plunging upward into the gloom. His eyes made out the shadowy outlines of a palatial chateau; it was set on a high bluff, and on three sides of it cliffs dived down to where the sea licked greedy lips in the shadows.
"Mirage," thought Rainsford. But it was no mirage, he found, when he opened the tall spiked iron gate. The stone steps were real enough; the massive door with a leering gargoyle for a knocker was real enough; yet above it all hung an air of unreality.
Which literary elements are used in this excerpt? Select 2 options.
characterization
mood
conflict
irony
imagery
foreshadowing
Answer:
conflict and foreshadowing
Explanation:
Answer:
e,f
Explanation:
words to convey its message. Part B What effect does the author achieve with the correct answer to Part A? А The lines provide a comforting image because the giant saves the lives of mariners. В The author encourages readers to consider becoming sailors to experience adventure с The stanza creates the feeling of peace that often follows a dangerous storm. D The words compare the light to the eyes of a human who can see for miles.
I need to come up with 3 ways to sell just a plain stick to a specific target audience of my choice and use different marketing strategies for each. Then I need to make that into an ad. I already did the first two but can anyone give me ideas for the last. It can't be about dogs. :) hehe thanks
Answer and Explanation:
You can use a technique called Content Marketing, where you literally create content on the simple stick and show how it is useful for different situations and how to buy it will be a satisfaction in the lives of customers.
This content can be made through several short videos that can be shared quickly on social networks, and can even go viral, since you will make the videos in a very creative and eye-catching way.
It is important that you upload these short videos on the most relevant social networks nowadays like instagram and tiktok, so you will be sure that a large number of people will have access to them.
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Read this stanza from “The Road Not Taken.” What does the speaker predict?
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
That his life will be better after taking the less travelled road
That he will forget all about his decision
That he will remember this moment and tell about it
Answer:
That he will remember this moment and tell about it
Answer:
The last stanza is consistent with the others in saying that the grassier, less worn path was the best decision. Also, it follows the others in that the speaker doesn’t dwell on the other possibilities he might have faced if he had chosen the first path. He continues to not regret his decision.
But the speaker seems more certain about his choice here than in some parts of the poem. In other lines, the second path is “perhaps” better, and supposedly less worn, but not necessarily so. Also, earlier in the poem, he talks about keeping the option of returning to the first path and wishing he could travel both. In this last stanza, in contrast, the speaker doesn’t envision sharing with others any of his doubts about the one path being “less traveled by.” He sees himself confidently saying it was a great decision, even though he will never know what would have happened if he’d taken the other path instead.
Explanation:
What's the central idea of the poem "From The Dark Tower"
Answer:
The poem is a sonnet that focuses on the injustices of racism
Explanation:
As the speaker says that the white people deprive the Black people of the fruits of their labor. but the speaker, who is Black, is confident that this will not be the case forever,suggesting that such hardships build strength and resiliency.
Answer:
Perseverance
Explanation:
Throughout the novel Roland pushes toward his goal of the catching the Man in Black at all costs. Despite setbacks, Roland's determination is unfazed. This is evident with small things like how the Man in Black is constantly ahead of him.
How does figurative language INVOKE emotions? I need three different ways, I am trying to start an essay
Answer:
Similies, metaphors can cause anger, happy or sadness.
Explanation:
Which line from “Educate Yourself” by Marcus Garvey is a fact?
“Your language being English you should study the English language thoroughly.”
“There is no use reading a page or paragraph of a book or even a sentence without understanding it.”
“If you are sitting down waiting for somebody, have something in your pocket to read until the person comes.”
“He knew the different parts of speech, he could paraphrase, analyze and construct sentences.”
Answer:
d
Explanation:
Answer: D
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i think its A but it could be D
25. Which sentence is correct?
a. Some deer have visited our backyard.
b. Some deers have visited our backyard.
Answer:
A.
Explanation:
Deer is the plural word for a single deer.
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why is brother vu the brother most likely to cut down the papaya?.
Read the paragraph.
(1) Last week, our English class watched a hilarious movie based on a novel. (2) In it, a couple of incompetent thieves bungle their way through a heist. (3) After several escapades, a priceless painting is stolen by the thieves. (4) But then, the thieves make an impressive blunder and accidentally return it.
Which sentence in the paragraph is in the passive voice?
Sentence 1
Sentence 2
Sentence 3
Sentence4
Answer:
Sentence 3
Explanation:
Which sentence uses inextricably correctly?
o If you inextricably practice, you might qualify for next year's team.
O My father inextricably packed his clothes in my suitcase.
O Because we are sisters, our memories are inextricably linked to each other.
O Farmers inextricably separated the male and female sheep in the pasture.
Answer:
it is C
Explanation:
Filmmaking is about control. The screenwriter controls the story. The director controls the actors. The camera operator controls what the audience sees.
However, one element that is very difficult to control is sound. If a film is being made outdoors, a noisy plane might fly overhead. A flock of geese might start squawking. An actor's stomach could grumble during a take. Worse, the footsteps of the filmmakers might be heard off-camera.
All of these things can ruin a film's sound. This is why films use Foley artists. Foley artists improve film sound by recreating it in a soundproof studio. They record themselves making footsteps and opening doors. They jingle keys in their pockets. They sit in old creaking chairs. These sounds are then used to replace the unwelcome sounds that were captured during filmmaking.
Foley sound was named after Jack Foley, who was born in 1891. Jack developed sound tricks that many filmmakers still use today. For example, he moved a cloth around in his pocket to mimic the sound of actors moving around.
Foley sound recording can be physically demanding. If a film showed an actor running and jumping, this probably meant the Foley artist had to run and jump, too. Foley artist Dustin DuPilka, who recorded sounds for the movie Men in Black, said, "If there's a lot of running in a certain [scene], you have to get ready to sweat all day."
Foley sound recording also requires a lot of creative thinking. Artists go to great lengths to get the perfect sound. For example, in the movie E.T., a Foley artist used a wet T-shirt stuffed with Jell-O for E.T.'s walk. In the movie Ice Age, a huge log was dropped into a pit of mud to create the mammoth's footsteps.
The next time you watch a film, listen carefully. Chances are that much of what you are hearing was created by a Foley artist.
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The author says that Foley sound recording requires a lot of creative thinking. The author supports this idea by
A.
including step-by-step instructions so readers can record their own Foley sound.
B.
presenting facts about films that were made without the use of Foley sound.
C.
giving examples of creative sound effects that were used in popular movies.
D.
showing what happens when Foley artists do not have enough creativity.
Answer:
C: Giving examples of creative sound effects that were used in popular movies.
Explanation:
After the author claims Foley sound recording requires a lot of creative thinking, she gave examples of the popular movies E.T. and Ice Age by describing the creative uses of objects to make good movie sounds.
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How long were the sea-scout troop going to be on holiday?
Answer:
2 days or 2 months or 2 years
Explanation:
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Lines 220–245: Describe the contrast between the knight’s attitude toward the old woman earlier in the tale (lines 179–197) and his attitude now (lines 220–245). What does the knight’s behavior in this passage reveal about his character? What might the knight’s changed attitude toward the old woman suggest about human nature? Lines 220–245: Describe the contrast between the knight’s attitude toward the old woman earlier in the tale (lines 179–197) and his attitude now (lines 220–245). What does the knight’s behavior in this passage reveal about his character? What might the knight’s changed attitude toward the old woman suggest about human nature?
This question is about "Wife of Bath"
Answerand Explanation:
1. At the beginning of the story, the gentleman was grateful for the old woman's help, but he was depressed and ashamed of having to marry her. That's because he didn't love her and wanted to marry a beautiful, young woman who was not ashamed. However, after the old woman's wise words and her transformation into a beautiful young man he came to love her.
2. In this passage the gentleman shows himself to be a man very concerned with the view that others have of him and the choices he made in life. That is why he is ashamed of his marriage, despite the fact that it shows that he is a man who keeps his promises.
3. This shows how human nature tends to be more concerned with appearances than with the content of something. We are constantly worrying about what others will think of us, in caring for what life proposes to us.
8. What option sentence uses the FAN BOYS?
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Research one of the following abolitionists:
Sojourner Truth
Harriet Beecher Stowe
William Lloyd Garrison
What ideals did they share?
How did they compare as individuals?
Why do you think we learn about Frederick Douglass in comparison to other abolitionists?
How were they embraced by the black community?
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Based on your understanding of the word connote, what seems like the most likely definition for denote?
to suggest
to remove meaning
to mean literally
to undo
Answer:
A.) to suggest
Read the excerpt from "A Poem for My Librarian, Mrs. Long.”
She would go to the big library uptown and I now know
Hat in hand to ask to borrow so that I might borrow...
But she nonetheless brought the books
Back and I held them to my chest
Close to my heart
How does the time period in which the poem takes place contribute to the reader’s understanding of this excerpt?
It shows how books provided the speaker with an escape from social injustices.
It illustrates how involved people were with the social conflicts in society and what they did to overcome them.
It gives the reader a clear picture of what Mrs. Long considered to be the most important issues of her day.
It provides specific details about what the speaker and the people in her community thought about civil rights.
Answer:
A
Explanation:
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which dialogue would be found in a drama?
Answer:
A Protagonist.
Explanation:
The main character of the play is known as the protagonist. The antagonist is the character who opposes the protagonist. The other characters that are neither the protagonist nor the antagonist are called the secondary characters. They may have a major part or a minor involvement in the drama.
Answer:
Heather: If I wanted to clean all day, I would have stayed home.
Explanation:
For example it will give the actor name and the line
Foxy: What up
Freddy: Nothing
Directing a Contentless scene reflection
Answer:
Where is it?
Explanation:
Which of the following lines is an example of personification?
The old black witch-woman worked on them all summer, every summer, down on her creaky knees, weeding and cultivating and arranging, while the house crumbled and John Burke rocked.
He stood still as an oak tree.
The great oak seemed to laugh with him.
He felt like a great oak.
Answer:
The great oak seemed to laugh with him.
Explanation:
Personification is basically when a writer gives human traits/abilities to something that isn't living. Since an oak tree, literally speaking, cannot laugh, this line would be personification since it's describing exactly that.
Answer:
The great oak seemed to laugh with him.
Explanation:
Which excerpt from "A Poem for My Librarian, Mrs. Long” includes the the best example of explicit detail?
And up the hill on vine street
(The main black corridor) sat our carnegie library
The stereoscope always ready to show you faraway
Places to dream about
But there was a world
Somewhere
Out there
And Mrs. Long opened that wardrobe
But no lions or witches scared me
I went through
Answer:
The excerpt from "A Poem for my Librarian, Mrs. Long" includes the best example of explicit detail when it states in the beginning, "And up the hill on vine street- (The main black corridor) sat our Carnegie library.
Explanation:
The excerpt from "A Poem for My Librarian, Mrs. Long” which includes the the best example of explicit detail is:
A. "And up the hill on vine street- (The main black corridor) sat our Carnegie library.According to the given excerpt, we can see that the narrator is talking about his hometown and their library and how Mrs Long was in charge of magical objects.
As a result of this, there is a use of explicit details to give the comprehensive meaning of the narration where the narrator describes the location of the Carnegie library.
Therefore, the correct answer is option A
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Which hint is most useful in determining the meaning of the word compassion?
The mayor showed great care and compassion as she spoke to the flood victims.
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An antonym for the word is cruelty.
The word compassionate is part of this word's family.
Compassion is a noun.
A cognate for the word is the Spanish word compasión.
Answer:
antonym is the answer
Explanation:
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Answer: An antonym for the word is cruelty.
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Which of these statements is an example of Stanton’s use of figurative language?
A) "He has denied her the facilities for obtaining a thorough education"
B) "He has compelled her to submit to laws, in the formation of which she had no voice."
C) "He has made her, if married, in the eye of the law, civilly dead."
D) "In entering upon the great work before us, we anticipate no small amount of misconception, misrepresentation, and ridicule."
How does the author introduce Isis' goodness in the Newsela article "How the Ancient Egyptians Shaped the World's View of Life After
Death
by telling the story of how she searched the world for her husband
oby stating that she acted in line with the idea of Ma'at
O by describing how she worked with Osins to create nature
O by explaining how she put Osins body back together with Nephthys
Answer:
by describing how she worked with Osiris to create nature
Explanation:
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The world for her husband by stating that she acted in line with the idea of Ma'at by describing how she worked with him.
What is the act?An act in the legal consciousness refers to either a serviceman's bodily movement or a term for a body of law/proposed law. In the guilty law discourse, an act is part of the thought of actus reus and, therefore, is a prerequisite to finding a defendant guilty.
The author introduces Isis' goodness in the Newsela article "How the Ancient Egyptians Shaped the World's View of Life After. The world for her husband by stating that she acted in line with the idea of Ma'at by describing how she worked with him.
Therefore, option(C) is correct.
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Read the sentence.
Laura Bush was an active first lady she advocated for women’s health and promoted education.
Which is the best way to rewrite this sentence?
Laura Bush was an active first lady: She advocated for women’s health and promoted education.
Laura Bush: was an active first lady she advocated for women’s health and promoted education.
Laura Bush was an active first lady she advocated for: women’s health and promoted education.
Answer: The first option is correct.
"Laura Bush was an active first lady: She advocated for women’s health and promoted education." Hope this helps you out!
How are the interactions different for gases, liquids and solids?
Answer:
gas vibrate and move freely at high speeds. liquid vibrate, move about, and slide past each other. solid vibrate (jiggle) but generally do not move from place to place.
Explanation: