HElp! Please find the errors and fix them! (12 errors)

HElp! Please Find The Errors And Fix Them! (12 Errors)
HElp! Please Find The Errors And Fix Them! (12 Errors)

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Answer 1

I was only 3 years old, but I still remember how I felt on that day so long ago; I can still see how it all looked to me. My parents had taken us to the museum with them. They had been planning this outing for days and it was a special occasion. I remember mom wore a blue dress and my father had on a suit. My sister and I wore matching dresses and we had on our patent leather shoes.

(I can't add the red symbols but here is what it should look like) Hope this helps!

Answer 2

Answer:

I was only 3 years old, but I still remember how I felt on that day so long ago; I can still see how it all looked to me. My parents had taken us to the museum with them. They had been planning this outing for days and it was a special occasion. I remember mom wore a blue dress and my father had on a suit. My sister and I wore matching dresses and we had on our patent leather shoes.

Explanation:

Hi. I underlined the fixed errors. Sorry if I didn't underline one, because I first fixed it, and then I underlined it.


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what was an anecdote, event, or situation from Anne Frank's diary that was clearly meaningful to her?

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Answer:

https://www.annefrank.org/en/anne-frank/the-timeline/

Explanation:

This link might help

Sometimes an author just tells the reader what a character is like. This method is called:

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Answer:

Characterization

Explanation:

That would be characterization!

"Dave gave his grandmother a dirty look when she asked him to help with the dishes," is an example of which method of characterization?

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Answer: Indirect characterization

Explanation:

This is indirect characterization, because the excerpt does not explicitly say he was mad at his grandmother. Instead, it gives an implicit clue that he is via body language.

Answer:

looks

Explanation:

it described the look David gave his grandma

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Hi, so for my LA class we are talking about happiness and I have a project to make a city come up with laws. And so I am asking you guys o give me a law you guys would like. I have a law allowing all marriages.

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A law I would be for everyone to be treated fairly, no matter their race, religion, shape, or looks.

Answer: You could add a law for fair punishments,free healthcare (or discounted),sugar tax to prevent diabetes,safe housing for runaways.

Explanation:These are just a few i did for a similar project :3

Read the passage below. Then answer the multiple-choice question on the right.

The circus is more exciting than the movies. Both the circus and the movies are fun. The circus is indoors, and so are the movies. The circus has rows of seats and popcorn, just like the movies. But at the circus, people do fantastic things. Trapeze artists fly high through the air. Animal trainers get into cages with dangerous beasts.



Which of these statements reflects a point of comparison between the circus and the movies?



A. The circus is more exciting than the movies.

B. But at the circus, people do fantastic things.

C. Both the circus and the movies are fun.

D. Animal trainers get into cages with dangerous beasts.

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Hello, I believe the answer is C.)
C is the answer I hope this help

what is located directly below where charlotte's chest is being stored? - Book: True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle

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link is scam don’t use it or click it

Answer:

INARA IMAO

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Find the sentence in which the bold-faced is used incorrectly.

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4. A evoke is not used properly.

Answer:

Evoke, it's incorrect.

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BRAINLIEST IF CORRECT which evidence best supports the following topic sentence? Another reason the school should open an after school computer lab is that the lab would offer safeguards for internet use that students do not get out of school.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Answer:

C

Explanation:

The neighbor "lady" was good to Harriet.

True
False

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Answer:

False

Explanation:

Welcome :>
I believe the answer is False

THIS IS OFF-TOPIC BUT LIKE

I watched an add, it still didn't work-

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HAHAHA POOR THING no but fr it did that to me idek

Explanation:

What didn't work

What should the transitional tags

but, however, and on the other hand be used for?


to introduce quotes

to contrast ideas

to show the order of ideas

All of the above

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The transitional tags "but," "however," and "on the other hand" are primarily used to contrast ideas. The correct option is B.

What are transitional tags used for?

They serve as cues that guide the reader in understanding your views. Use transitional language to move your ideas from one sentence to the next and from one paragraph to the next.

These transitional words or phrases are used to indicate a shift in the direction of the writer's argument, to introduce a contrasting perspective or idea, or to indicate a counterpoint to a previous argument. They help to create a more cohesive and effective piece of writing by showing the relationship between ideas and arguments.

While they can also be used to show the order of ideas or to introduce quotes, their primary function is to provide a clear contrast between two different ideas or perspectives.

Thus, the ideal selection is option B.

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Answer:

Contrast ideas

Example:

I ran home BUT, I was still late

I don't like fruits. However, I like bananas.

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Answer:

The answer is in the explanation

Explanation:

Yes, light can cause the metal to get warm because light carries energy. When light energy is absorbed, a material can change such as get warmer. In this case, only infrared light energy may make the metal warm because it is the only light that is absorbed.

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Who dies first in the Hunger Games chapter 23?

1. Foxface
2. Thresh
3. Clove
4. Cato

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Foxface Was lifted by a hovercraft when a cannon shot, so I’m pretty sure it was Foxface.

Answer:

I think foxface

Explanation:

pls help 15 points Which of the following quotes from The First Men in the Moon implies a theme of discovery?

“These moon people behaved exactly as a human crowd might have done in similar circumstances:”
“On these balanced a little body, throbbing with the pulsations of his heart. He had long, soft, many-jointed arms ending in a tentacled grip, and his neck was many-jointed in the usual way, but exceptionally short and thick.”
“I must confess that all this multitude made me feel extremely shabby and unworthy. I was unshaven and unkempt; I had brought no razor; ”
“In a little while the profound blackness had made his eyes so sensitive that he began to see more and more of the things about him, and at last the vague took shape.”

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Answer:

At first they descended in silence--save for the twitterings of the Selenites--and then into a stir of windy movement. In a little whilethe profound blackness had made his eyes so sensitive that he began to see more and more of the things about him, and at last thevague took shape."Conceive an enormous cylindrical space," says Cavor, in his seventh message, "a quarter of a mile across, perhaps; very dimly lit atfirst and then brighter, with big platforms twisting down its sides in a spiral that vanishes at last below in a blue profundity; and liteven more brightly--one could not tell how or why. Think of the well of the very largest spiral staircase or lift-shaft that you haveever looked down, and magnify that by a hundred. Imagine it at twilight seen through blue glass. Imagine yourself looking down that;only imagine also that you feel extraordinarily light, and have got rid of any giddy feeling you might have on earth, and you will havethe first conditions of my impression. Round this enormous shaft imagine a broad gallery running in a much steeper spiral than wouldbe credible on earth, and forming a steep road protected from the gulf only by a little parapet that vanishes at last in perspective acouple of miles below."Looking up, I saw the very fellow of the downward vision; it had, of course, the effect of looking into a very steep cone. A wind wasblowing down the shaft, and far above I fancy I heard, growing fainter and fainter, the bellowing of the mooncalves that were beingdriven down again from their evening pasturage on the exterior. And up and down the spiral galleries were scattered numerous moonpeople, pallid, faintly luminous beings, regarding our appearance or busied on unknown errands."Either I fancied it or a flake of snow came drifting down on the icy breeze. And then, falling like a snowflake, a little figure, a littleman-insect, clinging to a parachute, drove down very swiftly towards the central places of the moon."The big-headed Selenite sitting beside me, seeing me move my head with the gesture of one who saw, pointed with his trunk-like'hand' and indicated a sort of jetty coming into sight very far below: a little landing-stage, as it were, hanging into the void. As it sweptup towards us our pace diminished very rapidly, and in a few moments, as it seemed, we were abreast of it, and at rest. Amooring-rope was flung and grasped, and I found myself pulled down to a level with a great crowd of Selenites, who jostled to seeme."It was an incredible crowd. Suddenly and violently there was forced upon my attention the vast amount of difference there is amongstthese beings of the moon."Indeed, there seemed not two alike in all that jostling multitude. They differed in shape, they differed in size, they rang all the horriblechanges on the theme of Selenite form! Some bulged and overhung, some ran about among the feet of their fellows. All of them had agrotesque and disquieting suggestion of an insect that has somehow contrived to mock humanity; but all seemed to present an

Explanation:

Answer:

thats 8 point

Explanation:

Here: THE messages of Cavor from the sixth up to the sixteenth are for the most part so much broken, and they abound so in repetitions, that they scarcely form a consecutive narrative. They will be given in full, of course, in the scientific report, but here it will be far more convenient to continue simply to abstract and quote as in the former chapter. We have subjected every word to a keen critical scrutiny, and my own brief memories and impressions of lunar things have been of inestimable help in interpreting what would otherwise have been impenetrably dark. And, naturally, as living beings, our interest centres far more upon the strange community of lunar insects in which he was living, it would seem, as an honoured guest than upon the mere physical condition of their world.

I have already made it clear, I think, that the Selenites I saw resembled man in maintaining the erect attitude, and in having four limbs, and I have compared the general appearance of their heads and the jointing of their limbs to that of insects. I have mentioned, too, the peculiar consequence of the smaller gravitation of the moon on their fragile slightness. Cavor confirms me upon all these points. He calls them "animals," though of course they fall under no division of the classification of earthly creatures, and he points out "the insect type of anatomy had, fortunately for men, never exceeded a relatively very small size on earth." The largest terrestrial insects, living or extinct, do not, as a matter of fact, measure 6 in. in length; "but here, against the lesser gravitation of the moon, a creature certainly as much an insect as vertebrate seems to have been able to attain to human and ultra-human dimensions."

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Read the excerpt from act 1 of The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street.

DON

(picking up the cue)

Sure. That's the kind of thing – like sun spots. They raise cane with radio reception all over the world. And this thing being so close – why there's no telling the sort of stuff it can do.

(he wets his lips, smiles nervously)

Go ahead, Charlie. You and Steve go into town and see if that isn't what's causing it all.

What do the stage directions tell the reader about Don’s feelings?

He feels threatened by Steve and Charlie.
He may be more worried about the flash than he is admitting.
He is confident about the cause of the power outage.
He knows that Tommy is right but is keeping his feelings a secret.

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What’s the question
What is the question?

Which statement best evaluates the author's use of pacing to enhance the narrative?

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Answer:

The Answer would be C

Explanation:

Answer:

C

Explanation:

Find the sentence in which the bold-faced is used incorrectly.

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Answer:

1: A

2: D

Explanation:

2. D advocate is not used correctly

Item 2
Read this excerpt from "Ormuzd and Arimanes."

Ormuzd, the king of light, and Arimanes, the prince of darkness, both emanated from the Eternal One, and consequently were brothers. Arimanes, who was the second emanation, became jealous of Ormuzd, the first born.

How does this incident provoke a decision in the story?

The Eternal One decides to make Arimanes stay in the realm of shadows for three thousand years.

The Eternal One decides to give Arimanes a difficult task in order to test him.

Ormuzd decides to give half of his power to Arimanes in order to appease him.

When he emerges from the realm of shadows, Arimanes decides to put aside his envy of Ormuzd.

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Answer:

The Ethernal One decides to make arimanes stay in the realm of shadows for three thousand years.

Explanation:

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Read the excerpt from "Hansel and Gretel.”

The children, too, had not been able to sleep of hunger and had heard what their step-mother had said to their father. Gretel wept bitterly and spoke to Hansel: "Now it’s all up with us.” "No, no, Gretel,” said Hansel, "don’t fret yourself; I’ll be able to find a way of escape, no fear.” And when the old people had fallen asleep he got up, slipped on his little coat, opened the back door, and stole out. The moon was shining clearly, and the white pebbles which lay in front of the house glittered like bits of silver. Hansel bent down and filled his pocket with as many of them as he could cram in. Then he went back and said to Gretel: "Be comforted, my dear little sister, and go to sleep: God will not desert us”; and he lay down in bed again.

At daybreak, even before the sun was up, the woman came and awoke the two children: "Get up, you lie-abed, we’re all going to the forest to fetch wood.” She gave them each a bit of bread and spoke: "There’s something for your luncheon, but don’t you eat it up before, for it’s all you’ll get.” Gretel took the bread under her apron, as Hansel had the stones in his pocket. Then they all set out together on the way to the forest. After they had walked for a little, Hansel stood still and looked back at the house, and this maneuver he repeated again and again. His father observed him, and [said]: "Hansel, what are you gazing at there, and why do you always remain behind? Take care, and don’t lose your footing.” "Oh! father,” said Hansel, "I am looking back at my white kitten, which is sitting on the roof, waving me a farewell.” The woman exclaimed: "What a donkey you are! that isn’t your kitten, that’s the morning sun shining on the chimney.” But Hansel had not looked back at his kitten but had always dropped one of the white pebbles out of his pocket onto the path.

Which sentence best states how Hansel’s actions help reveal a theme?

Hansel lies to his father in order to protect Gretel.
Hansel fills his pockets with stones to mark the way home.
Hansel plans ahead for a way to save both Gretel and himself.
Hansel defies his stepmother in order to say goodbye to his kitten.

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Hansel plans ahead for a way to save them both

The sentence that best helps to reveal the theme is Hansel plans to save both Gretel and himself. Thus the third option is correct.

What is theme of the Hansel and Gretel?

The Hansel and the Gretel is the story of the brother and sister who were left in the forest by their step mother. In the forest they found a witch who was intended to eat the children when they become fat.

While Hansel learned about the plans of her step mother to leave him and her alone in the forest he assured his sister to not to fear. He will save Gretel and himself.

Thus the third option is correct.

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Rewrite the following sentence to correct the dangling modifier.

Sentence: We could see the flowers growing from our porch.

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Answer:

We could see the red flowers growing from our porch.

We saw flowers growing from our porch

What is the main idea of this passage?
A)
how to provide basic care to a red-eared slider
B) how to spot a red-eared slider in the wilderness
how to make a basking area for a red-eared slider
D) how to clean the living area of a red-eared slider

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I would say A). You didn’t show the entire passage however, it seems that the 2 paragraphs explain 2 different ways on how to take care of the red-eared slider explaining what it eats and how to clean it.

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Read the following selection:

The wheel stands out as an original engineering marvel, and one of the most famous inventions. This basic technology not only made it easier to travel, but also served as the base for a huge number of other innovative technologies. Yet, the wheel is not actually that old. The oldest known wheel is from Mesopotamia, around 3500 B.C. By that time, humans were already casting metal alloys, constructing canals and sailboats, and even designing complex musical instruments such as harps.

In fact, the main invention was not the wheel itself, which was likely invented the first time someone saw a rock rolling along, but the combination of a wheel and a fixed axle, which allows the wheel to be connected to a stable platform. Without the fixed axel, the wheel has only very limited utility.

In your own words, what was the author's purpose for writing this selection? Answer in the comment box that is blow this question.

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A: to inform

-the author uses an informative tone by explainging something to the reader in detail using facts and it looks like something you would see in a school book

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Read the following statements, and in two paragraphs, using your own words, identify the target audience of each one, including the reasons for your identification. Then, define the term target audience, and explain why knowing your target audience is important in persuasive writing.
1. The new Malibu Barbie Doll is a great addition to your Barbie collection. Ask Santa to deliver this gift under your tree this year!

2. Today's recipe is by far the most recommended by viewers on-the-go: crock pot potato soup.

3. Provide for the community by donating and serving food at the soup kitchen this Saturday.

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Hi there is Barbies at my house
1. The target audience of this one is for young children, most likely female. Typically, people over the age 7 know that Santa is not real, and the statement acknowledges Santa’s existence as if he was a real person. In well written persuasive techniques, the target audience must believe in what you say, so the target audience must believe in Santa and must be under the age of 7. In addition, the demographic for Barbie as a brand is mostly female, and the statement states that their produce is a great addition to the target audience’s “Barbie collection”. So, the target audience must be young girls.

2. The target demographic for this is for working adults with children. Crock pots are designated for people who don’t have time to sit there and cook. Working adults normally have some time after work to cook dinner, but having children changes that fact. Children take up a lot of time, so the target audience wouldn’t be able to cook dinner regularly. So they would use this recipe because it uses a crock pot.

3. The target demographic for this statement is for retired people. Retired people are retired because they have earned enough money to live comfortably without working. Since they have all of that accumulated money, they are able to donate to the statement’s cause. Retired people also don’t have jobs, which means that they would have the time to be able to serve food all day.

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we had to read that in class the other day lol

HELP ME PLEASE IM IN A TEST, I only need a base to go off of.

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i dont know what the passage is about but this is how you create a theme

To write a theme statement, follow these 3 steps:

Pick the main topic addressed in the story

Pinpoint the author's view on the topic

Format that perspective using a theme statement template

FLVS: 06.01 Making Arguments that Matter
What is a claim?

An expression of hope for the future
A personal and emotional stance on a topic
A question with more than one possible answer
A statement that takes a clear stand on an issue

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A statement that takes a clear stand on an issue

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Answer:

c, c, c

Explanation:

Consider the speakers in "The Charge of the Light Brigade" and "The Battle of Blenheim"
Write two paragraphs to compare and contrast the voice in the two poems. How does each poet give his speaker a distinctive voice? What effect does this voice have on the poem? Use evidence from each poem as evidence for your answer

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Answer:

all

Explanation:

Choose one symbol from The Diary of Anne Frank and write a short paragraph analyzing it, using specific details and evidence from the text. Your paragraph should thoughtfully analyze the meaning and purpose of the symbol and contain a well-written topic sentence. Your response should be about 100-150 words.

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Write something like her diary name other cat I don’t know just try your best

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Lesson Summary. Both objects and people from Anne's past serve as symbols that represent the strong emotions she encounters during her ordeal. Anne's diary serves as a symbol of comfort and independence. The yellow Star of David represents religious oppression, and the Ration coupons represent sustenance and greed.

Anne's grandmother comes to Anne in her dreams as a guardian angel who watches over and protects me and makes me feel happy again. Anne's grandma symbolizes security and protection. Let's take a couple of moments to review what we've learned about the symbols that appear in Anne Frank's Diary of a Young Girl.

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