can anyone tell me my mistakes pls?

 Can Anyone Tell Me My Mistakes Pls?

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Answer 1

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It looks great to me! I would have put the same answers as well! Great job!!

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Answer 2

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#5 instead of "didn't shave", put "hadn't shaved" and #10 instead of "had, had" put "had"


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Which detail from the Newsela article "Dream Jobs: Investigative Reporter" supports the central idea that investigative reporters can bring about real, substantive change in the world?

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In some parts of the world, investigative journalists are a constant target for violence.

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Match each excerpt to the correct type of poetry.

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I went over them all a few times. I would say that 1-2 would be lyric and 3-4 Narrative. Based on the wording it can be tricky because lyric and narrative can sometimes cross paths. I hope this helps!

Answer: That is the correct answer

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What upsetting news do they get about Mr. Kraler?

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Kraler? Miep tells the group that the suppliers were arrested and that they could not get any ration books anymore, so the food would have to be rationed.

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He says that the thief had caught up to the others

Fad diets are weight-loss programs that enjoy short-term popularity and are sold based on a marketing gimmick that appeals to the public’s desire and fears. How can you tell if a program is a fad diet

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Promises a quick fix.

Promotes 'magic' foods or combinations of foods.

Implies that food can change body chemistry.

Excludes or severely restricts food groups or nutrients, such as carbohydrates.

Has rigid rules that focus on weight loss.

Read this passage by Mawi Asgedom and answer the question that follows:

Hi, my name is Mawi Asgedom. I'm excited to offer this class to you for one simple reason. That's because I believe you are far more intelligent, far smarter than you know. And the reason I believe that is, I lived it in my own life. See, I was born in Ethiopia; in my homeland there was a war so I became a refugee and I had to come to this country when I was seven years old. I didn't know any English when I came. I went to first grade, it was really hard. I didn't know the alphabet, I didn't know what to do in class. I looked around and thought, man, I can't be successful like these other kids. My family had also grown up in poverty, grew up on welfare from first to twelfth grade, my father was legally blind. I thought I couldn't do it. Fast forward to eighth grade, I had a D in my math class; I got Cs in some of my classes. I got kicked off my basketball team, I had a lot of challenging problems, I didn't have a lot of confidence.

Well, in high school something changed. I acquired some study skills, my mindset changed. Guess what guys? I became an A student. I became a top athlete in sports. And in my senior year of high school, something incredible happened, I couldn't have imagined. I got over three hundred thousand dollars worth of scholarships, I got into every college I applied to. I ended up going to Harvard University, the number one university in the United States, some people say the world. When I was at Harvard, I got As while I was there.

What I figured out, what I learned, is that any student, of any background, can be successful, whether you are rich or poor. For those of you that are out there thinking, well Mawi, I'm not that smart, I can't make it, I'm always struggled in school. In this class, I'm going to show you how to achieve and do things you never thought possible in the classroom. You're going to find out you're a lot more intelligent, a lot smarter than you ever knew and I'm going to show you how. For those of you out there who are great students, who say Mawi I've already got this, guess what, I spent four years at Harvard with some of the best students on the planet and I learned a lot of things from my own journey too. I've worked with more than a million students over the last fifteen years and if you are a good student right now, I'm going to make you better. This class will make you better.

Read the following statement: Well, in high school something changed. I acquired some study skills, my mindset changed.

What evidence did Mawi use to support this statement?

He started earning A's, became a top athlete, and was accepted to Harvard.
He believes that any student, from any background, can become successful.
He got a D in math class, C's in other classes, and got kicked off the basketball team.
He was a refugee from Ethiopia, grew up in poverty, and had low self-confidence.

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Answer:

The first option- He started earning A's, became a top athlete, and was accepted to Harvard.

Explanation:

He explains how his whole life up until high school he was failing classes and struggling in school. He supports his statement "Well, in high school something changed. I acquired some study skills, my mindset changed." with the fact that he started to get straight A's and he soon got accepted into Harvard.

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The reading passage name is VILLAGE SCHOOLS AND TRAVELING SOLDIERS on commonlit.
PART A: Which TWO of the following best identify the central ideas of this text?
A. Traditional Chinese education requires constant study.
B. Education in China is superior to education elsewhere.
C. Without traditional Chinese education, children will become arrogant.
D. The goal of education is to master many skills, both practical and intellectual.
E. Education is only for some—others become “wild” laborers.
F. With a good education, a “wild” child can become more useful to his family.

3. PART B: Which TWO phrases from the text best support the answers to Part A?
A. “The object of Chinese education is to pump up the wisdom of the ancients into the minds of the moderns” (Paragraph 1)
B. “According to Chinese theory, or practice, a school which should only be in session for six months of the year, would be a gross absurdity” (Paragraph 1)
C. “The same saying is current in regard to the second degree, and with not less reason” (Paragraph 2)
D. “He may be incomparably more useful to his family than the other, but so far as education goes he is only a ‘wild’ lad” (Paragraph 3)
E. “He has very little opportunity to learn anything of practical affairs, and still less disposition” (Paragraph 5)
F. “So far as they go these are valuable acquirements, although they can scarcely be termed an education” (Paragraph 6)

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D hope that helps have a good one

1. Matthew Henson was an explorer who didn't get credit during his lifetime for his ___________________. 2. Over and over, Henson traveled through the icy ___________________ of the Arctic. accomplishments, determined, expedition, frigid, wilderness

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Answer:

The first blank is accomplishments, and the other one is wilderness.

Explanation:

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1. Louie, Phil and the rest of the men in the Green Homet were told to go on a rescue mission to find another plane. They were told to go in the Green Hornet, a plane that they thought was not "airworthy." There are several examples of sacrifices the crew members were asked to make to save another ship. What do you think about this mission: How would you feel if you were asked to fly a plane that you did not think was safe on a mission that was probably not going to be successful:​

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Answer:

t

Explanation:

you dad

Correct the punctuation and capitalization.
please take some berries with you mrs. Barry.

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Answer:

Please take some berries with you, Mrs. Barry.

Answer:

Please take some berries with you, Mrs. Barry.

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the last day of slavery Event 1​

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Answer: slavery is no good

i hate slavery

Explanation: thank for the points

june 18 1865

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i looked on the web

What is the best way to organize a conclusion?

by summarizing the thesis, the topic sentences, and the details, and ending with final thoughts
by restating the thesis using different words, summarizing the main ideas, and ending with final thoughts
by stating a new thesis, supporting it with details from the essay, and drawing a conclusion
by repeating the thesis using the same words, listing all of the main ideas, and drawing a conclusion

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Answer:

By restating the thesis using different words, remember not to add extra ideas to it and just stick to summarazing the main ideas and ending with whatever extra thoughts you need to conclude the essay.

Explanation:

A conclusion is the ending paragraph where readers are finishing up reading and gathering ideas from what they read, you need to emphasize the thesis, which is your position about the prompt, by restating it. Remember to use different words when restating your thesis in order to really show what you are trying to say. Finish up with some concluding statements that support the main idea of the whole paper and you're good to go!! I hope this helps!

Answer:

B, restating the thesis using different words.

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What is a claim? Statement the writer is trying to prove is true. What the evidence and explanation show Supporting arguments as to why the argument is true. Reasons why the counter argument isn't strong.​

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Answer:

Statement the writer is trying to prove is true.

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Consider how Kate defies the traditional roles of a woman in society. How is her attitude in comparison with other women from her time period? What changes would she have to make to become more socially agreeable?

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Answer:

Thus, although Kate was clearly presented as a New Woman at the start of the film, Petruchio forces her back into a more traditionally feminine role at the end of the wooing scene. In this scene, Kate's initial dominance

and the threat to masculinity that her status as a New Woman represents are mitigated by Petruchio's ability to take control.

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which line from the passage best supports the inference that the author believes a female is better suited for recognizing love​

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Answer:

And the girl shoots with her eye

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Why does the author include the following sentence in the passage?
“A bird’s wing is a wonderful flying-machine, which men have been trying to
imitate these many years.” (paragraph 2)
A to describe how birds are different from humans
B to explain how strong birds’ wing feathers can be
C to introduce how different birds fly in different ways
D to illustrate how exciting the study of birds’ wings can be

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Answer:

B. to explain how strong birds' wing feathers can be

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Write a thesis statement that expresses the topic and your viewpoint on how the campaign effectively promotes the influenza vaccination to a range of audiences.

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Answer:  The influenza vaccination to a range of audiences will be all about simply creating awareness that the disease can happen to anyone -- irrespective oftheir social or physical background. ... Hence it will focus on the contagious part of the disease.

Explanation:

The question wants to analyze your writing ability, for that reason, I can't answer the question for you, but I will show you how to answer it.

What is a thesis statement?It is the conclusion of the introduction of a text.It is a precise point in the text where the author's positioning is shown.It is the author's main opinion, based on facts and data.

To write your thesis statement, you need to read about the subject on which you will write the text and develop your opinion on the subject, based on the information presented by the texts you have read.

It is important to note that the thesis statement must be presented in two or three lines.

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Yes. She always wanted to do something __(4)__ different but she knew she wouldn't be able to speak fluently.

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Okay..... cool......

Reread lines 1-10. What does the author reveal about himself

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Answer:

wheres the text

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Why does Wrong-Mind want Right-Mind to bury most of the treasure?

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Answer:

Explanation: Wrong mind breaks sentence agreement because the sentence tenses do not agree. Sentence tenses are past tense, current tense, and future tense. past tense uses -ed, current tense uses -ing, and future tense usually uses the word will before a word

Hey if you could help me out with this that would be great!​

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Answer:

for 2 you can use petit to describe the brother

Explanation:

for 3 you can use massive or huge to describe the cows and use towering for the mountain.


Inference
Excerpt from Les Misérables by Victor Hugo
What is the author trying
It is important to mention here the various rumors to say in the beginning

A family ties are more
important than actions

B a person's past shapes their
future

C talk can be as important as
actions

Which is true about Myriela
A He is noble,

B He is charitable.

C He is strong

D He is powerful.

Short Answer: What other
questions would you ask to learn more about Myriel

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Answer:

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Explanation:

"Haven't you heard? I'm as cold as the tip of the iceberg that tipped the Titanic." - "KOD" by J. Cole A. Simile B. Metaphor C. Oxymoron ​

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Answer:

A.simlie

Explanation:

Reread page 299. At this point in the play, how would the people of the Annex describe Anne? Support your answer with details from the text.

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Answer:

The people of the annex described Anne as a quiet, smart, and intelligent girl with a great detail and a feel for emotions and observations. They considered her to be charming, self-aware, sensitive, often impatient,  sometimes a know-it-all, open, determined, easily hurt, spirited, hopeful, fun-loving, desperate, with all  the longings, expectations, and attitudes that adolescence brings.

Explanation:

Anne spent 761  days in the annex. During these days, Anne portrayed herself in a very versatile mode which is evident from the various anecdotal remembrances by various members of the annex.

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Prompt Options for Tier 3

Utilizing the twelve words from your Tier 2 vocabulary, write a well thought out, concise, short fiction story utilizing one of the following prompts. Please highlight the vocabulary words as you use them to help with grading purposes. Your short story should include well developed characters, dialogue, and an identified theme. Word count should at least be 500 words and no more than 800 words.

This is worth 50% of your first major grade.

Students will submit their final papers via TURNITIN.com

This is an IN CLASS essay. Online students must be on the zoom with cameras on.


Write a fiction story where the sales manager of a local store has had enough. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where a hairdresser received a shocking confession from a customer. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where a famous FICTIONAL character has been written into the wrong story. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where the main character is startled awake by . . . . Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where a priest is hearing a unique confession. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where ten people are in a power outage. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words in your story.


Write a fiction story where the reader is privy to a Fan Fiction Writer's Group meeting. Make sure to use ALL vocabulary words.

Just choose from one and write any fictional story that matches with the one you picked, and use all 12 of the vocabulary words. PLEASE AND THANK YOU

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the story was too long so I put it in a pdf gogle document :) hope it is good...it is a bit long sorry!!

Answer:

ight

Explanation:

Which sentence uses a passive form of the verb justify?
A )Trevon's mother justified her son's actions by referring to his morals.
B )Celia felt justified in missing class to help someone in need.
C ) Kevin had justified his misconduct with half-truths.
D ) Samantha's lack of civility was justified by Willem's rudeness.

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

The last option uses 'was justified' to describe Samantha's lack of civility. The object of the action becomes the subject of the sentence. So, the answer is D. Good luck ^^

The sentence that uses a passive form of the verb "justify" is Kevin had justified his misconduct with half-truths, which is in option C as "justified" is in the past participle form and "had" is the auxiliary verb, indicating that the action of justifying was done to the subject of the sentence.

What is a passive verb?

Passive voice is a grammatical construction where the subject of the sentence is acted upon by the verb, rather than performing the action themselves. In other words, the focus is on the object of the sentence and what is happening to it rather than on who is doing the action. In the sentence "Kevin had justified his misconduct with half-truths," the subject is Kevin, but the verb "justified" is in the past participle form, which is commonly used in passive voice constructions. The auxiliary verb "had" is also used to indicate that the action happened in the past.

Hence, the sentence that uses a passive form of the verb "justify" is Kevin justified his misconduct with half-truths, which is in option C.

Learn more about the passive verb here.

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Which sentence below accurately describes the inclusion of the information box on the second page of the article?

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Hello. You did not present the answer options and did not even present the item to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for it to be answered. However, I will try to help you in the best possible way.

An information box is added to an article to present additional information that will help the reader understand the article he is reading. This additional information can be a map, a reference, a glossary, among others. In this case, you must identify the type of information that your article's information box presents and associate it with your question's answer options.

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Write a figurative language sentence for each picture.

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Ugh what kind of figurative language?

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Can i get brainly?

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Why does The Misfit shoot the grandmother in "A Good Man Is Hard to Find"?

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Answer:

because misfit told the grandmother that he was punished for a crime he did not remember, and the lesson he took with it. and to misfit any crime that is committed no matter how big or small the punishment will be the same

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Describe the potential traits and their probabilities for an offspring of two heterozygous parents with a trait for brown hair, B, or blonde hair, b.

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Answer: Some potential traits of an offspring of two heterozygous parents with traits for brown hair, B, and blonde hair, b, include brown and blond. Since both parents are heterozygous, the genetic traits would be Bb and Bb. Also since the B (brown) is the dominant trait, the likelihood of a brown-haired offspring is three-fourths more likely than a blonde offspring. All the genetic possibilities are BB (brown), Bb (brown because of the dominant trait), Bb (brown), and bb (blonde).

What is tone in writing?

A an authors choice
B inverted syntax in poetry
C the authors attitude
D deliberate grammatical errors

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C - the authors attitude

Answer:

c the authors attitude

Explanation:

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