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COuld you review some of this book for me and tell me your honest opinion. I wrote it and I feel there is something wrong with it. Please be honest and give tips!! Thank you so much for this huge favor!!!❤

Here it is.....(sorry about the typos.)


“Benjamin,hop in the pool. It’s too hot to be just sitting here. I made some fresh lemonade.” says Jazylin, our maid.

I hate days like this. You know those days where there is nothing to do. It’s too hot and boring.


“Attack!” yells Belle, my 4 year old sister.


“Whoa,there Captain Belle! Hold your fire.” say Jazylin.


“Only if he surrenders.”


“Surrender from what?”I ask


“Breathing my air”


“Wow,are you serious?”


“Yes.”


“Ok, I’ll let you blow out one of my birthday candles instead.”


“Deal. Bye measly peasant.” She says as she floats in the pool on her flamingo floatie.


“Jazzy,what element do you think I will get?”

I can’t help wondering. This is the 14th time I’ve asked. My family comes from a long line of masters--people with a power to control one element. My mum is an earthmaster. My father is an airmaster. My parents hate firemasters and plasma masters. A firemaster once killed my grandpa. However, the elements aren’t decided by genes. They are decided by your personality. Earth is stubborn, Water is calm and passionate, Air is free and fun, Fire is wild. I know, what about plasma? Well, I'm not going to get plasma. Plasma is the only one affected by genes, and always is different. You can only get plasma if you have two parents that are fire and water;have two parents that are plasma; or are a twin and your original elements are fire and water. Very complicated. I won't get too far into that.


“Benjamin, don’t worry about it.”


“But,you know! Please tell me, Jazzy! YOu know me better than my parents.”


“I do have a guess but you will see, so don't worry about it.”


“Ok, Jazzy.” I say with a sigh

Answer:

It has a good start, but you should add more context to what you are writing. It is hard to follow what is happening. Otherwise, the story is set up very well.

Answer: I think it's great, I write a lot of novels on my free time.  

It depends on the type of story you're writing, think of the genre, and if it's for personal reading, try to understand the motives of the story, or if you're sharing it try to understand the audience reading the piece. make sure to choose words wisely and carefully as well, after writing look at your word choices and see if they satisfy you or try to change them to more appealing words. what are your goals? think about how you want this to grasp people's attention.

Think about what inspires you to write the piece. dont forget to take your time when writing. when writing try to pay attention to detail and to help get ideas read a bit about the genre you're writing about.

if you ever have questions im available.

what are the strategies in which design elements are used?

Careful attention to the music during this time is not as important as letting the music wash over you, allowing you to respond to it emotionally. True or False

pls answer fast i need it fast

List 10 words that you could use to describe Howard Arkley’s ‘A splendid Superior Home’

Write positive words plz

Does everyone have a conscience ?

Need help!!!!
Sculpture in the round is any freestanding artwork surrounded on all sides by space.

A. True
B. False

Question 2
1 pts
Amelia wants to take an art course at a local community center. She loves looking at
pieces that are not only beautiful but also functional. One of her favorite collections in
the local museum is a group of ancient Egyptian bowls that have interesting carvings on
them. What course would you recommend to Amelia?
O visual arts
O decorative arts
O performing arts
O written art

"An art education is valued by _________ for its nourishment of flexible
thinking, self-discipline, and creative thinking.

what are 3 call and response examples


FIRST RIGHT ANSWER GETS BRAINLIEST ​

Need help due tommorow be creative pls my wifi sucks

Who painted Mona Lisa

Which of the following examples has three beats in each measure?
Pls help.

MAKE MEANING
Activity 2: Improvisation
Direction: Create and improvised version of any of the following instruments:
B. Glong Khgek
A. Ta phon
TAPHON
is a traditional
drum of Thailand
is barrel-shaped,
with two heads
and is played by
the hands and
fingers of
both hands
- barrel drum; played with the
hands and generally played in
pairs
C.Ching
Is a cymbal-like percussion
instrument that is shaped
like a cup. It is played by
pairs by striking them
together

Help please!!!!! Lesson 13 Doted Notes

Questions
1-3

And tell me the beats and note for bass and treble clef

By manipulating the __________ of the colors in the work, Gericault recreates the emotions of the scene.
A. lines and hues
B. value or tone
C. lines and tone
D. hues and value

porque arte es tan aburrido?

Lesson 9 Note Values

Just do question 3

Tell me where to put the bar lines and the beats for treble clef

The use of ___________ brings attention to the main subject by placing a white object in the background. Analyze the painting;what compositional tool is being used here

BRAINLIEST+10 POINTS+5 STARS!!
Here is a portion of my book (not the beginning) I would appreciate it if you could leave some feedback and tips! Thank you for this HUGE favor!

here ya go...

“Bull’s Eye!” I say as I throw another apple at my target, with my airmaster powers.

“Oh, I can do better than that.” says Fallon, my 11-year old sister. I have 4 sisters and 5 brothers. There are 10 of us . I know. Crazy. There is Bill and Newt, who are earthmasters, Thomas and Camille who are watermasters. Me and Fallon are airmasters, and then there is Joseph,Levi, Lysandra, Cassandra and Sophia. Fallon and I are close in age and a middle child so, we are best friends. Our family has a gene that causes us to get our element a year early, so I got mine last year. However, you can't go to FIfeoraz Academy of Masters until you're 12. FAllon is an airmaster, just like me. I have to leave next week so we are doing a bunch of our favorite games including throw the apple at the target.

“Theodorus Vincent Jones! Fallon Louise Jones! What on earth are you doing?”yells Mum.

“Oh no full name.” whispers Fallon. I gulp.

“Mum? We are playing Apple Targets.” I respond.

“With my apples? I’m making pie tonight with those Theodorus!”

“Oh, sorry Mum.” says Fallon. “Would you like us to pick you some more?”

“Yes, and make sure they are the good ones. Let me fix you a snack before you go. It’s a long walk to the orchard.”



how did ya like it? be honest. Its Fiction/Fantasy. Thanks!!

. Do people exist who can accurately predict the future? Or do these people simply use
other
clues and subtext 10 make general prediction
that are more than likely to be true?

For each of the images given below, identify which are vector images and which are bitmap images

how is line defined in drawing?

4. Aktiviti seni sulaman boleh dihasilkan dengan baik pada ?​

nah he tweaking hahahahahahaha lol XD
found on instgram because of the glitch

Pov your the new kid at school and all the boys told you there names wrong on purpose so when you try to say someones name they all laugh at you and tell you that you said there name wrong . Welcome to my life

Can anyone give me the info on these

Will mark as brainliest

A mansion is Group of answer choices the box offstage stage that holds all the props and costumes needed for the play. the platform segment that bore the stage planks. the French term for a temporarily crafted stage piece set up in a public square. an elaborately constructed house with many rooms.

Which type of theatre movement became popular during the World war 2 in France

You can create a dreamy look to a photograph by using a large aperture and then either focusing on an unimportant piece of the photograph or focusing well in front of or behind your main subject. True False

Straight, perpendicular lines of color that create right angles in the upper left-hand corner.

The artist who painted this piece of modern art focused mainly on __________ and __________.
a.
balance; design
c.
symbolism; design
b.
balance; proportion
d.
imagery; arrangemen